| "Unseen Lover, Hearts Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 17:08 CST
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Wow great chapter I also know how it feels to have your muse run away Kari has gone and had not returned keep it up your story is great dont let any one tell you other wise luv ya Ran-Chan
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup, that certainly was a lot quicker than before, thanks for the update and know this: No matter how long the breaks between updates are, i will always be here to read your stories, they simply rock!
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: January 24, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really getting into this story! Please update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: anon... On: January 24, 2005 00:43 CST
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i really love this fic, and yeah, the last chappy was a lil short, but it's ok! i'm excited about the next ones! and when inu and kag start hanging out! ahh.. love.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 23, 2005 19:44 CST
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Thank you, I am only glad to be allowed the opportunity to read them. I am sorry I can offer nothing but a review in return. I think I understand what you mean, it gives us an insight into not only Miroku's thoughts but the events happening in the background and the fact that there are um...traditions or customs that Kagome will have to adhere to (Kind of like when I went to Japan, had to get a book on the local customs beforehand ^_^;) I look forwards to the next chapter but please, don't hurry on my account. I will be here whenever. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: seashell On: January 20, 2005 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your story, its quite humerous.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 20, 2005 18:57 CST
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Excellent chapter. I really like how you are playing this out, flicking between the POVs of the two of them. Slowly we are learning more about them both and their personal attitudes to the world although I think in time they both may change somewhat, hopefully learning to accomodate one another. I look forwards to seeing what you have in store, I hope your muse finally recovered from last time. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: January 19, 2005 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! An update! I luv this story! Please update ASAP! ^-^
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Fyrloche-not signed in On: January 19, 2005 06:55 CST
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Hello, luv. Good to see you writing again. And even though it is short, it is a good chapter. Look forward to reading more. Take care, Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you planning to continue this soon? This is really good!
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Reviewed By: skaterpg guy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 03:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE update! This is really really good. I want to read more!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 03:51 CST
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I've had my muse escape before, don't worry about it. See, she ran off with my mailman, married him, had the marriage annulled Britney Spears style, took a month off in the Himalayas to 'find herself' and then came back. I keep her chained in my closet now. :) But I like the premise of your story, and I like how Kagome can see their auras! "You're beautiful." *Looks star-struck at the glowing light that is Inu* I sense some danger coming from the Kikyo sector as well, that bitch should die. *Puts on the Kikyo-hater sticker* Anyways, I hope you update soon, and oh! Before I forget, I could beta your story if you want. I'm good with grammar/spelling/characterization. :) Email me on that. Anywho, happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: Rawben On: November 29, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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aww! ch 6 is so short! you have to update soon! i love the plot, but i need more! :(
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Reviewed By: queen mira On: November 28, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update plz
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: November 27, 2004 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooo! I like this story a lot! Please update ASAP! I want to smell some love in the air! ^-^
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