| "Unseen Lover, Hearts Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEy. Yay, ya got a beta..i think. good for you! Haha,well i enjoyed this chappie! And ya-i cant wait for more. and of course i will always read your stories, though i dont know what they will be, cause whatever comes from you has GOTTA be goooood!!! Hahaha! Well, good job! Luvin it! Take care and "gives you cookies" for you! Ja ne!-Sly ~^-^~ BTW-WAs just wondering when your gonna upadte "Forever Pain" I LOOOOVE that story and i want moooooooore! Okay, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: September 03, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the story so far it is a great plot please update asap!
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Reviewed By: JackoVance [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 22:48 CDT
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I think you should be careful with the potion think. It might ruin the story ut I'm sure it will work itself out fine in the later chapters. Your good enough to handle it. Hope you update soon. Have a nice time.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: September 01, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The potion just made things more interesting. Can't wait for the next chap!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 31, 2004 17:22 CDT
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Beautiful chapter. To be honest at first I was unsure of the potion idea but as I considered it it made more sense to me. There is only one thing I would say, on the night of the new moon would it still be in effect? As his demon blood receeds would she at least on that one night get to see him as it does not tell her of his Hanyou form. Sorry, getting carried away there. Seriously loved the chapter. Houza is fine, almost like a nickname ^_^ Till next time good luck & best wishes. Hououza PS. Get well soon!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 06:07 CDT
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Ooooh, another homage to the classics (Psyche and Cupid). By, the way, vile is the way the potion tastes and vial is what it comes in.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Mija, Lovein the story. Its awesome. You still need a beta? I'm open if ya do. Send me anything, I'll check it. Cause I love your stories soooooo much!!!!! They are so awesome...I'm trying to member what other stories you updaed...I'll get it though! Well, just email me if you need a beta still, and I'll be waiting for your next chappie!!!-Slywolf9 ~^-^~
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: August 23, 2004 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got a great story going. I look forward to more chaps. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 23, 2004 17:43 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Love the way this is playing out, the interactions are perfect so far. Look forwards to seeing what happens when the two of them meet. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 13:33 CDT
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Awesome story!!! This is the story of Psyche and Eros right? But a little different. I love greek myths and your stories so this has to be a great story! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: KiTTy PAws-182 On: August 22, 2004 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a cool fic! Update soon! -KiTTy PAWs-182
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 22, 2004 16:30 CDT
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Thank you for continuing, love the way this is continuing to play out. Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 21, 2004 18:15 CDT
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Excellent opening chapter. Love the way you have completely recreafted the world, shifting around all the characters. Look forwards to reading more when you are able. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 07:19 CDT
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You definitely need that beta. Aside from that you have a classic plot shaping up and I am interested to see what new elements you can bring to it.
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Reviewed By: JackoVance [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 06:35 CDT
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I haven't read this story yet but it's on my hdd so maybe tonight. Your other storys are very good even if I didn't reviewed them by now. But I will, someday. Enemy Mine, Forever pain, tdoh and aftermate were or are great. I see you have the same probleme like I with a beta-reader:) and I my case it's more drastic 'cause english is not my first languague. Whatever, I will wait and see what great storys you will relieve. thx for the great time with your storys.
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