| "Those We Leave Behind" Reviews/Comments [ 166 ] |
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Reviewed By: Serena SIlverMoon On: September 26, 2004 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. When Kurama said "Why? Are you considering membership, thus expanding my, as you put it, `over-inflated ego'?" And then Kagome's answer "No! What I was considering was breaking into your underwear drawer and selling your boxers!" Where so funny I almost stop breathing I was laughing that hard. I don't know a girl that wouldn't be in line to buy Kurama's boxers if they could. Please get the next chapter out soon I can't wait to see what you come up with next and wait happens next. SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: September 24, 2004 22:19 CDT
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great chapter. plz update more soon!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 24, 2004 17:09 CDT
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ROFL!!! Have Kag steal his boxers!!!! Do it!! Please???
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Reviewed By: aniki On: September 18, 2004 16:29 CDT
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why not a Kag/Kuw? i think it would be great. Kuwabara is a nice character in personality i mean. And besides i would like to see (imagine) Kurama's face when he is exchanged by Kuwabara (you know the "how come she prefers him?" look). Anyway, this is fun to read and i'll reading for i cant wait to see Kagome to find Kuwabara again.
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: September 14, 2004 22:47 CDT
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wow. so are things going to heat up between them? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: tbiris( On: September 14, 2004 18:38 CDT
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looks like Youko isn't getting lucky so far... I'm not sure if that's good or if it's bad though.
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Reviewed By: tbiris( On: September 14, 2004 18:38 CDT
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looks like Youko isn't getting lucky so far... I'm not sure if that's good or if it's bad though.
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 09:34 CDT
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I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet. You had me laughing at Youko and Kurama's internal dialogue in this chapter. Priceless! And the whole "human dictionary" thing...I didn't expect that, but the comment was so Kagome! I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Mefdet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 09:22 CDT
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I love this story!!!! I especially love the youko/suichi conversation! Very funny! I haven't read fics like this. Usually Kurama's a goody goody. Does Kagome know how to fight? N E wayz...UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: September 14, 2004 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far please update soon but is she ever going to see Kwabara or who ever that boy was again. Anyways update soon. Bye!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: September 07, 2004 15:35 CDT
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lol. so what was with the mission and why did Kurama, Hiei, and Yusuke hurry back? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: September 06, 2004 18:25 CDT
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interesting. update more soon!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: September 04, 2004 12:30 CDT
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lol!! that was great!! update more soon!
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Title: Moonshine
Reviewed By: Kurama Mate On: September 03, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol luv the fic keep updating please want to see what happens next cant belive kagome turned down kurama
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 03, 2004 11:09 CDT
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LOL!
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