| "Those We Leave Behind" Reviews/Comments [ 166 ] |
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Reviewed By: Roses_Petal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWWY! Umm...who's Kagome paired with? Anyways this story's really great! But I still want a answer....hehe...Kurama's a bad boy....ooh naughty..player...I've never seen anyone portray Kurama like that! Good job! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 22:34 CST
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ouuu, loved it. I agree, that was good-- hehehee. Never expected that surprise ending. Sorry, just a short little note to say that I like what you have written and that I can't wait for more. --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 16:59 CST
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Okay, you've definately got a good story on your hands, but the flow of the story is horribly interrupted with too many viewpoint changes without notifying the reader (with something such as ******** or ^^^^^^^^^). I lost half of the meaning in some chapters and skipped half of others. It wasn't like that in the beginning of the story, but now it seems to get worse and worse as the story goes on. You may want to consider at least plotting out a basic outline for the chapters and look for a beta reader to help with the melding of the plotline. You have a lot of talent with some hellaciously awesome ideas, but you need some more practice with how you write out your chapters. That's just my input, take it or leave it, but if you want me to go into further detail, please email me. I'll enclose it at the end of the review. Take care and keep writing, BRL red_flame204@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: January 31, 2005 15:54 CST
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and I thought Kag had bad timing...but it looks like Inu does too...
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Title: What the hell were you thinking?
Reviewed By: guesswho256 On: January 21, 2005 18:26 CST
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How are you gonna write yourself outta this? I can't wait to see you squirm. This is gonna be good!
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Title: Hehe
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so funny... can't wait to see the contest and the hilarity that comes with it... ^_~
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Reviewed By: IcerenaMarie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, and extremely creative! You dont follow much of the old cliches at all, its very well written. Hiei as a human is absolutely original. Excellent, you're a really well writer ^_^
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 18:32 CST
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And one more thing... I just remembered but... Congrats on being the first person I have seen to turn Hiei into a human!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 18:32 CST
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LOL! This is hilarious! Youko is probably in heaven also... ^.^ I am now regretting all those times I by-passed your story. It's well-written, and the plot seems consistent. But We don't know what the pairing is... Wait, I know, it's Kagome and... someone. Yep. I got it right! So... so far, Shizuru hasn't had any lines, you'd think she would have at least talked once by now... I'm just pointing that out... we need some sarcasm from Shizuru! As I said, I enjoy your story!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 02:42 CST
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LOL...that was great...but what oh hiei..is he still nursing his abused bits??? well that was another GREAT chapter...Thanks:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 02:31 CST
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man you really had me worried there...I thought something bad had happened to Souta..that's just EVIL of you you know that...EVIL I say...LOl...Great chatper:D
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Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny can't wait for the next chapter! oh boy youko and yuusuke are in for it!
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love this story please update soon this is soooooooooooo good lol i cant wait for more
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 10:48 CST
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PWEASE? ^~^ And I liked it a lot so please update soon for all of your fans alrite alrite. ^__________________________________________________________________________ ______________________^
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 04:53 CST
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WOW!! that was great but oh so sad...THANKS:D
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