| "Those We Leave Behind" Reviews/Comments [ 166 ] |
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Reviewed By: orange obsession On: November 07, 2004 11:45 CST
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HAHAHAHA. when i read hiei's prize i laughed sOooOo hard. it was just so.. random? please update soon. i wanna see what happens. oh and good story.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: November 07, 2004 10:39 CST
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ouuuu, this is getting reaaaaaaaally good! I cannot wait to see the fight between Kagome and Hiei and the consequences of that fight, hehehe. Great job! I love this story; it's flowing very nicely for you and is always interesting. Keep up the amazing job. --Aitu
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: November 07, 2004 00:53 CST
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interesting chapter! update more soon!
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Reviewed By: lil'sesshi On: November 06, 2004 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who wins what happens next you got to update soon
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: October 30, 2004 21:38 CDT
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great chapter. update more soon!
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Reviewed By: zillah On: October 30, 2004 20:58 CDT
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MORE!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna know what happens! Who will she end up with?! so many possibiliteis! and now Youko on the loose! gah, next chapter soon, please!!
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Reviewed By: HieiWannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a hard time reading IY fic's, but I think I'm gonna read this one. I may have an incorrect impression that most IY fic's are trash because I usually only read the X-overs, and most X-overs are bad. But this title and summary intrigued me, and I've been pleasantly surprised to find that you seem to understand the personalities of the characters, which is something that's missing in a lot of writing, not just X-overs. Looks like you've done a good job.
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Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:16 CDT
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i'll tell you the same thing i just told the other person i reviewed. you have what 68 going on 69 reviews, if i had that many people to review for me id be updating reaulaly. (well personaly i update regulaly anyway even though i only have 3 reviews and there all from the same person) so update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 27, 2004 09:29 CDT
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.....this won't turn out well will it? Although I am curious as to how Youko's going to get out....
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Title: excelent
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 15:30 CDT
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i can't wait to find out what happens next, and i'm glad you up-dated the suspence was driving me nuts. it was an excelent chapter and i completely understand kag about being mad i mean the only thing i know so far is that sess betrayed her by sleeping with someone else. i mean i kinda got that in the last chapter but the day before there wedding, i would have been inclined to purify him. anywho like i said great chappy lots of questions and pls up-date soon
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 18:30 CDT
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oh my. update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 18:17 CDT
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interesting twist....to say the least. i hope this continues to be a Kag/Kur pairing. was it even a kag/kur in the first place? i started freaking out when Sesshomaru was saying stuff about how he planned to rape Kagome and Kurama was losing interest! AND WHEN THE HECK IS KUWA-CHAN GOING TO APPEAR?! a few chapters back, you said that you were going to prolong their meeting to keep the readers in suspense, but now, it's frikin torture! well, that's all i felt i had to say, i'll keep reading if you keep writing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please tell me that you are gonna update soon! That was just mean *pout*. I love the story btw. (in case you couldn't tell *smirk and wink*) Good luck and can't wait! Ja ne! ^.~
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Title: those we leave behind
Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the chapter but..........aren't kurama and kagome going to be paired up any more??? (pouts sadly because i adore the couple)poo!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 21, 2004 11:25 CDT
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Ah, loved the insight as to what happened between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I can't wait to see that developed even further. I really can't think of any constructive critism at the moment-- perchance a longer chapter, hahaha. But that's just out of my own selfishness and wanting to know more right now, right away. I think that you are doing has been developing and has developed very nicey. Keep up the great work and I hope to hear more from you soon!!
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