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Title: Ohhhh
Reviewed By: legacycyrah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was beautiful.
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Reviewed By: legacycyrah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a beatiful fanfic. My eyes are brimming with tears. Just lovely and so touching.
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Starilight_Hotaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 14:20 CST
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Umm, that was touching. I cried and I don't do that that often. Please can you do more little stories like this? I'm reading In a Different Light now and again bravo on your beautiful writings. There are few that can express themselves as you do.
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Reviewed By: TheSeeingTruth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Another story that takes my breath away. Heres to the best authoer Media Miner has to offer. This one made me cry and cry and cry at the end of chapter three. Please continue to write! You have extreme talent.
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Reviewed By: Siri On: November 06, 2004 08:46 CST
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What's with all these deathfics that have come out since episode 162? Geez. I know in Eastern mythology in which youkai exists, there are various ways that can extend the life and youth of humans. Sess has risked himself to save Rin in the series. It doesn't make sense that he would let Rin die of old age while doing nothing about it.
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Reviewed By: Ellie On: October 21, 2004 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... this is such a depressing (though sweet) story! Sadly, I can easily imagine it all happening. Your characterization is smashing...
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Title: I cried!
Reviewed By: Sailorstarfighter777 (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 15:33 CDT
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This is so great. As I was reading it, I cried! It was sad, but it was real and nothing stings like reality. You are my favorite writer. Did you know that? You've written the best Sesshomaru and Rin fan fictions I've ever read. I wonder if you are a published writer - if so, I wouldn't be surprised. I hope one day you write a Sango/Sesshomaru fan fiction. That should be interesting. I love your work...my heart is like so moved... Please keep up the good work. I'm your devoted fan!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 01:45 CDT
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:::BLows her nose::::: *Sniff*sniff* that was such a sad ending. I actually teared in this story. Sorry let me get ahold of my self. The story was sad but excellent. You have a great imagination and great talent. Keep it up I love your stories.
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 20:51 CDT
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I'm really sad that i couldn't get to this last chapter any faster...darn computer....anywho...i loved this last chapter and it's everything i think Sesshoumaru is. he's tough, but underneath the only thing he lets himself "melt" for is Rin. It was of course a sad ending, but i loved it!! i love all your stories and i can't wait to read the new one!!! your writing is so beautiful...i love it!!! :) :) :)
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Title: Must read reviews . . .
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:19 CDT
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was ......for a loss of words...wow!I loved it not to graphic which made me happy.That was awsome.
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Title: *tear*
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing!! i loved every part of it...my favorite chapter was the last one...maybe because it was the biggest lol? But i liked how Rin was kinda Dominant...well kinda....i liked how she was the expierenced one and not him....because sesshomaru is always the DOMINANT one lol! But i thought the story was good and it made me shed a couple of tears!! ----------------Jen p.s just to let u know i read all of ur fanfics and i love them all! your a great writer
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Reviewed By: Jolly Old St. Nicholas On: September 27, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* That was beautiful, simply BEAUTIFUL.
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Reviewed By: A Flower-sama On: September 27, 2004 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You were right, it wasn't a very happy ending, but then again, a happy ending just wouldn't have done it justice. You made it sad and sentimental at the same time, so it's anything but a bad ending. I really enjoyed reading yet another one of your wonderful stories! ;)
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