| "Even Immortals Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 23:18 CST
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OH, that was so incredible sweet, oh, I'm like crying. This is such an incredible story, you truly are a talented writer, and I am humbled by your talent to write such an emotional and touching story! THis is one of the best stories I have ever read, and I am completely serious when I say this! It was amazing, and I hope you are to write more in the future. You have a talent, and you should be proud to use and share it with everyone!!!! I love this story!!! YOu are the greatest!!! Please continue to write stories!
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Reviewed By: mystory reader On: November 03, 2004 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!OMG!OMG! GREAT FANFIC I LOVED IT!!! I cried half way thu!!!(I have never cried for a book, a fanfic, a t.v. show or a movie!GREAT JOB!) Once I told my friends about this fanfic they said(and I qoute)"WHAT??? SHIPPOU DIED???"!!! o ya and my sis really liked it 2...NOW! I'm gonna go read your other fanfic.BYEZ!!!
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Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gapes* that was... so... *silently tears* *hugs herself* beautiful. yes, beautiful. and I use that word sparingly, but this was one of the very select few that I've read which have earned the use of the word. you have real talent, and I loved every moment of it. every second, every insant, every blessed word. something like this that can tear at a person's very being, and leave a mark on their soul deserves recognition, and I wish that there was a way I could give this the credit that it deserves, but, alas, I cannot. I can merely tell you how much I have enjoyed your works. I love your work. I can't say it enough. I love your stories, and your artwork. you have real talent, so don't waste it on fan fiction, 'kay? you should publish an original story that follows this plot. I think that, even though you wouldn't get rich, it would be worth the effort if only to bring the joy to others out there. ~~~Starlett~~~
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Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: October 05, 2004 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love ur story...i was almost practically crying by the end..it was so sad and then almost ahppy but happy i dont know I LOVE IT! happy tears...and im not even an emotional person. keep writing please and u should consider doing another one shot like that but like different plot...u no?
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 02:17 CDT
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OMG!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! luv luv luv!!!! its so sad but happy at the same time! (well mabey not happy, but you know) you did a GREAT job on this fic and should be proud!!! sess/kag fics are the best!
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Title: Oh MY!
Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CRIED THREW THE HOLE STORY! I LOVED IT, OH MY GOD IT WAS WONDERFUL! GREAT JOB!!
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Reviewed By: RisaCha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Myah, Yume, you did it again!! It seems that everyone was brought to tears, and, at the risk of being one of the crowd, and must admit I was sniffling by the end. If I lie, may I die a horribly painless death ^-^. And I know this is a one-shot, but boy-oh-boy if you decide for a sequel I'll be on it like a fangirl on Fluffy-sama! Luv ya!
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c@aol.com On: September 27, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo, Bravo ^__^ I really enjoy it some parts had me crying. It was wonderful! I had read anything good lately I this wasn't good this was Fatantic! (Hope I speel that right)
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: September 27, 2004 07:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best story's I have ever read.The emotions are so...real. I hope you continue with more story's I would really like to read more of what you write.Anyways Bye!
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 16:56 CDT
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wow......uhhh...wow!...and again, WOW! normally, i dont care for kag/sesshy pairings but for some strange reason, it was like this story was calling to me and i couldnt help but read it. IM SO GLAD I DID! both characters were completely IN character and i think you sell yourself short in that sense. i am so gonna read your other stories now! be happy because you have officially made yourself a new fan! ~~aliya~~
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Reviewed By: Dark Neko-chan On: September 23, 2004 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply beautiful...it's so romantic and dramatic at the same time...I love it...great job. Long live Kagome/Sesshoumaru
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Reviewed By: clavira On: September 19, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, what should I say? Oh, yeah, I know: SWEEEET!!! I love it and I think it is abolutely right, that Sess is ooc. Hope you update also your other FFs soon, clavira ^__~
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Reviewed By: mysticalwings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...oh...WOW! that's was jsut soooo good. :wipes tears from face: i think this has to be one the best fics from sess's POV that i've ever read. it's so hard to tell things from sessho's perspective (believe me i've tried) but you did i flawlessly! it wsas so beautiful. and the way you transformed his character over teh course of the story was perfect. i wasn't too fast, but not drawn out either. oh gods that was awesome. with you artistic talent and beautiful writing style, your next project has to be a manga! again loved the story. can't wait for more from you. ja ne ^_^
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Title: *wiping tears away...
Reviewed By: Blackhearted [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! OMG! OMG!!!!!! u don't noe i much i cried over this fic!! i simplily luv u rite now!! this is like one of the best one-shot/fic i ever read! u definatly r on the top of my list of authors now,lol i just absolutly adore the fics u write and this one might be even better than 'Forgetmenot' [which is the first fic i ever read and still the best] anyways keep up the awesome work and keep on writing cuz i'll be readin them all tehe...later gurl
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Title: *sniff*
Reviewed By: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! On: September 17, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. oh. my. god. you made me cry! wow. thank you for that. (the story, not the tears lol) the description of their voices and their emotions was phenominal (did i spell that wrong? meh) and they were both very very IN character, which is important to me. as you know (i hope) i am a big fan of all your fics and pics, and you make me happy! you also answer my emailed questions. KEEP WRITING AMAZING STORIES! youre good at it. i love the one shot! CHEERS
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