| "Even Immortals Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky (mm member) On: September 14, 2004 16:21 CDT
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I'm so glad that you decided to post something finally, Yume! ^_^ This is definitely a fav Inu oneshot of mine now, and it went beautifully, just like all your other fics. Great job! ::gives you a chocolate turtle::
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll admit it ... you managed to put me through a guantlet of emotions on this one also. Someone said it was long for a one-shot, but it also went through all the stages it needed to tell the complete story. I don't see how you could have pulled it all together without it being "long". It was a wonderful story and I can see where it would take Sesshoumaru 500 years to figure out feelings ^_~ Oh, and if you see that teacher ... thank him for me too! ^_^
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Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 08:09 CDT
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You could also add "Love changes everything, how you live and how you die" from Andrew Lloyd Webber's Aspects of Love...I enjoyed the story (I do agree, it's a bit long for a one shot, but it's well written, so that makes up for it :D )
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Title: Even Immortals Fall
Reviewed By: koishii_bara1 On: September 14, 2004 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story. i hope you write a sequel or something this could really be more than just a one-shot. just thought you would like to know my thoughts on it. ty koishii
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Reviewed By: spdswyf On: September 14, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can not come up with words that can express how well written this one shot of yours is. I've read your other stories and I must say, you get better and better!! Thanks for gracing us with your fine writting skills.
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Reviewed By: Fallen-666-Angel On: September 14, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, about the nine you had a few typos. Nothing too bad, but they were still there. Now the story on the other hand was just amazing. It took forever for me to read and I neglected alot of homework (Baka teachers and there exames and its only sep 13th ::cries:: the rest of the year is gonna be hell) but was so worth it. Thank you for writing it, it was just what I needed. Fallen-666-Angel P.S. About the quotes exelent choices and yes a very wise nerd lol the sakura blossom one was my fav from the last samurai. the last things just kinda popped into my head as I was about to post this so it may seem kinda random but oh well. CF I did not forget you here is your reward for helping on such a great fic ::hands CF 150lbs. of the best Chocolote in the world:: Now there is more where that came from if you keep doing your job so well.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 00:46 CDT
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I love this. You have such a great insight into Sesshoumaru. It's almost as if he is standing over your shoulder and telling you his story. I only hope my muse is as great as yours. Can I borrow him as sometime? Keep going. Your doing great. Later.
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Title: Amazing!!
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No one can write this pair like you can, Yume!! Heartfelt, tear-jerker... I loved every moment!! Oh, good lord, I might have to go delve into one of your other fics now, just to reminisce. Such great writing!! I wish I could say more... but I have a bad feeling about where my thoughts are running with the adoration and praise. @_@
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its gotta be a 10 all around the board, because quite simply this is awesome!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 22:52 CDT
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Awesome. Really Awesome. A very powerful story from his point of view. Keep up the great work. cools beans as peas.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the most sweetest story i have ever read!
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Reviewed By: KoishiiKarasu On: September 13, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH It was a wonderful story. It had me crying at the end, I was so happy for Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Please write more wonderful storys like this that move my heart. Wonderful!!Nya, Nya :3
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Title: Wow....ur good
Reviewed By: Lalala....not telling! On: September 13, 2004 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey person! i love this fic, but u still gotta update ur other ones u know! Please update! please?? i'll do anything! c'mon...ur being mean now...update alreay. i swear....im gonna die before u update....j/k.
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 19:15 CDT
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Oh my...*wipes tears away* this was so, so sweet and angsty! Loved it! Lavender
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: ultamitblueyes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh...my...gawd!!!! This was sad!! I cried and that doesn't happen when i read a sad story...*sniffle* I love it...I'ma read it over, I love al your stories Yume and this one is that sadest, and i love it!!(I usually hate sad stories). Excuse me while i blow my nose and wipe my eyes then reread it....
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