| "Even Immortals Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon(not Signed in) On: September 17, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(sniff) That was so beautiful! I'm still wiping tears from my eyes. It's nice to see that you and CF are still doing well. One thing I did notice (other than this fantastic one shot) was that the other fics are missing. Where are they and have you updated them recently? Well, I'm off. I wonder if I can find a tissue somewhere.
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful. Yes Inu-Yasha and the others died but you wrote that so wonderfully that it made me think that I was watching the scene! You're right it would have destroyed the flow of the story. Sesshomaru in human form... wow I'd never think that he'd do that. I love all of your stories they all somehow make me smile. Please do continue to write more stories like these.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 15, 2004 17:09 CDT
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Sry about that. I pressed enter by mistake. =P Good fic! =D
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in On: September 15, 2004 17:09 CDT
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: obese_a_tron5000 *not logged in* On: September 14, 2004 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am still sniffling. That has to be one of the sadest stories I have ever, not to mention sweet. I love how like with other suthor it takes like 80 chapters to fall in love, but in this one, it's not rushed or anything, he just loves her and thats all there is to it. Really great job, i can't tell you how much I love your stories and how big a fan I am but, I can try, right? Anywho, can't wiat for your next story, because of course I know what the pairing will be. Awesome story, I think I am gonna go read it again...
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Title: I can't even begin...
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: September 14, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It takes a lot to bring me to tears, but it's been ten full minutes since I read the last line of your breathtaking fic, and I haven't stopped crying. This is the best SessxKag fic I've ever read. Ever. Period. And they are my fave IY couple, aside from IY and Kags of course, so I've read a helluva lot. I can't stop crying. How amazing. What amazing work you've done. My heart is still beating wildly. A side note: are you the same Youkai Yume that's done SxK artwork posted on "A Single Spark"? What talent you have, do be able to write and draw so beautifully. Thank you so much for writing this beautiful piece. I will read it over and over again.
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Reviewed By: Arashi-kun On: September 14, 2004 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the was absolutely beautiful. I've always wanted to read a fanfition with Sesshoumaru's POV. I must say is was very well done. If you are ever to write a book, I wish to buy it.
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Reviewed By: KouseiJL [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 18:28 CDT
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Very nice! *leaves TWO boxes of chocolate turtles^^* The greek tragedies were always a favorite for me in English...Antigone being one of the best. The Oedipus plays were over-rated to me, but the ones I liked the most were the Agamemnon trilogy. Anyways, your style is ever improving and becoming more and more your own! The detail is rich and oh so vivid^^. Every time I read your stories I am so drawn into them that it takes someone physically shaking me to stop reading! (I always have chocolate nearby, so at least I don't starve!) CF's been a great muse! Keep up the fabulous work.. heh, I almost wish you were published/pamphlet-ed just so I could keep one of your stories on my shelf! Can't wait for your next chapter! Kousei
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Reviewed By: KouseiJL [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 18:28 CDT
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Very nice! *leaves TWO boxes of chocolate turtles^^* The greek tragedies were always a favorite for me in English...Antigone being one of the best. The Oedipus plays were over-rated to me, but the ones I liked the most were the Agamemnon trilogy. Anyways, your style is ever improving and becoming more and more your own! The detail is rich and oh so vivid^^. Every time I read your stories I am so drawn into them that it takes someone physically shaking me to stop reading! (I always have chocolate nearby, so at least I don't starve!) CF's been a great muse! Keep up the fabulous work.. heh, I almost wish you were published/pamphlet-ed just so I could keep one of your stories on my shelf! Can't wait for your next chapter! Kousei
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky (mm member) On: September 14, 2004 16:21 CDT
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I'm so glad that you decided to post something finally, Yume! ^_^ This is definitely a fav Inu oneshot of mine now, and it went beautifully, just like all your other fics. Great job! ::gives you a chocolate turtle::
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll admit it ... you managed to put me through a guantlet of emotions on this one also. Someone said it was long for a one-shot, but it also went through all the stages it needed to tell the complete story. I don't see how you could have pulled it all together without it being "long". It was a wonderful story and I can see where it would take Sesshoumaru 500 years to figure out feelings ^_~ Oh, and if you see that teacher ... thank him for me too! ^_^
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Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 08:09 CDT
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You could also add "Love changes everything, how you live and how you die" from Andrew Lloyd Webber's Aspects of Love...I enjoyed the story (I do agree, it's a bit long for a one shot, but it's well written, so that makes up for it :D )
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Title: Even Immortals Fall
Reviewed By: koishii_bara1 On: September 14, 2004 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story. i hope you write a sequel or something this could really be more than just a one-shot. just thought you would like to know my thoughts on it. ty koishii
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Reviewed By: spdswyf On: September 14, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can not come up with words that can express how well written this one shot of yours is. I've read your other stories and I must say, you get better and better!! Thanks for gracing us with your fine writting skills.
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Reviewed By: Fallen-666-Angel On: September 14, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, about the nine you had a few typos. Nothing too bad, but they were still there. Now the story on the other hand was just amazing. It took forever for me to read and I neglected alot of homework (Baka teachers and there exames and its only sep 13th ::cries:: the rest of the year is gonna be hell) but was so worth it. Thank you for writing it, it was just what I needed. Fallen-666-Angel P.S. About the quotes exelent choices and yes a very wise nerd lol the sakura blossom one was my fav from the last samurai. the last things just kinda popped into my head as I was about to post this so it may seem kinda random but oh well. CF I did not forget you here is your reward for helping on such a great fic ::hands CF 150lbs. of the best Chocolote in the world:: Now there is more where that came from if you keep doing your job so well.
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