| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: Perfect
Reviewed By: Lets-fighting-love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2021 02:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awesome . I've also read a couple other fics and they were
fantastic as well!
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Title: hnngngh
Reviewed By: ksilvs On: August 28, 2016 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hott stuff. Inspired me to draw fanart too :>
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Reviewed By: ZWorld [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2012 03:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was amazing.... Love every single second of it! It was so addicting... Truly amazing and hot! You write the most amazing Bulma and Vegeta fanfictions. You capture their personalities so well... I am always left so speechless and craving more. I've read all of your Dragonball related fanfictions and I got to say... love them! Keep writing! I'll always keep my eyes open to see more BxV from you in the future :) |
Title: Utterly amazing.
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2011 06:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this so much. Sensuality, sexuality, all raw and primal, beautifully captured in stylish writing. |
Title: woh!
Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2011 08:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is sooo hot! wow! I love it very much :D this is one of my favourite lemons and it´s a very original idea. I love the way vegeta uses his ki XD |
Title: SO HOT !!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Violet62. On: August 11, 2010 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In this fic Bulma is such a little hot slut !I have always believed it is lust that makes B&V get together. Beautiful work ! Keep going , I'm looking forward to reading more of your fics !
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Reviewed By: lumpy space princess On: June 29, 2010 06:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lover this story I can't stop reading it please write a sequel a book or something. The whole dom/sub thing is way more fascinating than I thought good work.
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Reviewed By: emerald2309 On: March 08, 2010 15:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely! Exhilarating! Fxckin Fantastic! =] This read was so intense. . . Also, I've noted on many of your stories you tend to mix-up the variations of "to." You use "too" sometimes when it should be with only one "o". Just stating. =] Anyways, it's a small mistake compared to the genius of your story ideas and portrayal! MWAH. Bravo. Lovely. && ever sexy. *Continues to read more Fanfics by the lovely Temptress*
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Title: I LOVE YOU REALLY
Reviewed By: Ellz On: December 06, 2009 10:04 PST
Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AMAZING.This story really plays into our kinks & Vegeta just being him, sexy, dominant. I ADORE YOU
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Title: GASP
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 12:13 PST
Comment/Review:
OH GOD, this was so good it's ridiculous. You are MASTER of smut and I BOW down you and only you! Caprice
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Reviewed By: lois On: September 26, 2007 14:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>Pointless lemon with meaningless plot. Oh yah.<
i was scared that it would be too easy and boring but you wrote an awesome story!!! Just FANTASTIC! :-)))))))
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Reviewed By: DbzTeske On: September 23, 2007 10:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a brilliant story!! loved reading it!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Dominions [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go! That was fantastic!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Dominions [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go! That was fantastic!
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Reviewed By: Britt-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 10:00 PDT
Comment/Review:
XD wow you're such a great writer!!! I write stories too, but thye're all rated teen, i've read some of your Inuyasha fics too, keep up the great work!! ^_^ -Britt
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