| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 17:47 PST
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Mm.org wouldn't let me review for days and days and now I've forgotten what I was going to say so *sighs* in the spirit of duty to author feedback, I just HAD to read this chapter again.... Man, what a man. That's all I have to say. I love how you write Vegeta!
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Title: Damn
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn dude.......nice fic...EXCELLENT FIC, though i think i'm the only guy who's actually reviewed it... the rest seem like vegeta girls....(nods)
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 07:35 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By gods if she will not be his little bed slave I will! What is wrong with her! *sigh puff* I need a very cold shower now. Oh yes, cold shower......**walks off muttering about sexy flame haired saiyans, bitchy hardheaded blue hair women and her lack of the fomer**
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 19:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know i got to give it to bulma she is a very strong woman,because i don't think that i would've lasted that long without him..and for him to ask her to come home i mean come on bulma where is your BRains at. oh we waited a long time for this chapter and i just want to smack her...alright thats it just give vegeta my e-amil and send him to me...i'll take care of him for now on.....great chapter once again...update soon..and i hope that everything is well with your pg...merry christmas and a very happy new year...maria
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 19:30 PST
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MERRY CHRISTMAS! What a lovely update. Man, what a man. .........
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 19:30 PST
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MERRY CHRISTMAS! What a lovely update. Man, what a man. .........
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Reviewed By: jasdhasjkdhlaskhd On: December 13, 2004 16:49 PST
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pls update. its been like a month already
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Title: ahgagagaga
Reviewed By: pisquenta On: December 11, 2004 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far the best Vegeta/Bulma fic I've ever read!!! OMG!! Thnsk you for writing it!! Please go on before I explode!
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Reviewed By: Lillian Rose On: December 03, 2004 03:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this fanfic is awsome. I really hope that you update soon. I can't get enough!
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 19:10 PST
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Finally! An update!!! I've been waiting for your next chapter for so long now! This chapter was a bit sad about the way Bulma was torn into two. I want to know what Vegeta thinkS!!!! ::pouts cutey:: Keep up the great work and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 22, 2004 16:10 PST
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If Bulma's not some bitch-in-heat then she's gonna have to stop all that masturbating or she'll end up with "wanker's cramp" (it's an aussie term).
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Reviewed By: yeah! On: November 20, 2004 14:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa! that was..hmm..yummy. poor bulma tho, damn he's harsh
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: November 20, 2004 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how, but this thing just keep getting hotter. I feel bad for Bulma, but the poor girl is gonna have to make a choice between her pride and her heart.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: November 16, 2004 15:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Title: dear gods!!!!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 15:14 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my good lord! I swear if I were standing right now my knees would be shaking, what a sexy chapter! It just keep getting better and better, I just love the thrill of it! Can't wait for chapter six! ^__^ love, Blue Dragon
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