| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: sysaiayn On: June 27, 2005 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic its brillient oh please continue please dont ley that be the end
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Title: update!!!
Reviewed By: pagliaccia On: June 23, 2005 08:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
could you PLEASE update soon!!! I've been waiting for a new chapter please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat On: June 01, 2005 18:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been a fan of this since the beginning and I truly hope you haven't given up on this story. Your interpretation is so amazing and orignal that I find myself checking everyday to see if you've updated yet. It's so hard to find new B/V fics that isn't cliched or too out of character*, not to mention the HOTNESS! Keep up the good work. (*When I say too out of character I mean that pretty much all fics are out of character because it was never in the show. It is not a reflection of the writing talent/ability of you, or anyone else for that matter.)
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Title: definately hot.
Reviewed By: bura400 (not signed in) On: May 18, 2005 18:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
Is it hot in here ot is it me? Definately hot and Sultry, makes you want to jump into an ice-cold shower. Bulma, damn what a lucky girl. I'd would have loved to watch that too. ^_~ Bura
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 21:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Lots of lemon good. Interpretation original.
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, please update soon. ^_^
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: bohemian lady On: May 06, 2005 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing to this. it is perhaps one of the best erotica stories of passion and dominance i have read.
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Title: UPdate!
Reviewed By: Lillian Rose On: May 02, 2005 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I really can't wait till you update. Please do it soon. I keep checking everyday!!! Much love, Lillian Rose
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Title: Your Killing Me!
Reviewed By: Fivefivewbrowneyes On: April 26, 2005 05:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please update this fic! it's killing me to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: Cloe On: March 31, 2005 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dang gurl u just gotta - GOTTA - update! i cant wait any longer! omg, all this waiting is killin meeh!!!
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Title: OMGoodness
Reviewed By: PurrfectMissM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGoodness i LOVED every single part of this story!!!! wow, i've found another favorite! i'm a HUGE fan of your work and just keep up the great writing b/c i never get tired of reading it! whew this was definitely a steamy lemony goodness one too. just hats off to you!
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Reviewed By: 3cee On: March 19, 2005 14:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off let me thank you for one hell of a story.like u keep veg the basterd he can be :) but bul is holding her own. cant waite to see what happen when she gets home(that is where she need to be right) im sure veg has a gift waiteing for her!!lol gota say im really enjoying the stroy for a minute i though u gave up on it "sad" glad u didnt. till next chppe
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: March 18, 2005 14:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! ^^ update soon!!
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 22:12 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I take back the comment I posted on your "Dark Desires" reguarding this theme being overdone. I don't know how you do it. It's the same story, but you bend it and twist it to your own specifications to the point where it seems completely new all over again. Your writing style is utterly amazing. You are a gifted author and I hope to see more additions to your collection of stories very soon.
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Title: WOW.....AGAIN!!
Reviewed By: Iceblueangel On: March 15, 2005 14:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said before, this is one of the best i've read. you really have a talent for writing. keep it up and update soon!
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