| "Corporate Deception: Fate of Her Land" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 21:54 CDT
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Holy crap! I was totally sweating bullets there! LOVED it. Great action scene. I can't believe that everyone fell though; I hope Sess can be okay and bring them back or something. I love how you made Naraku fall from his own tricks…cocky little thing. I am totally psyched and ready to find out what happens. Too excited to even be sad that it is almost over...that will come later. Thanks again for sharing this awesome story with everyone!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: July 11, 2005 20:02 CDT
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Well, I'm glad that Naraku is dead, but man, what a price to pay! I'll wait ... edge of my seat - for what happens next.
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Reviewed By: The Purple Ghost On: July 11, 2005 01:19 CDT
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It's time for another late night review... At first I was worried that you might be getting KAgo and Inu together to quickly (although I was enjoying every little bit of the fast journey) but my fears have been rested! Your pacing is great! My favorite like of all time, Sessho being glad that at least his brother was getting a little "somthing-something" I almost hyperventalated I laughed so hard...I could just...see..it...evern though per the anime and the manga Sessho would never dare sink low enough to think about his brothers sex life... But is just seemed to fit... And that slbow in the rib that Sessho gave him when he was "sugesting" the tour.... You have created one of the best stories I've read ina long time....for a while I was afraid that Inuyasha fanfiction had reached that point where nothing was original anymore...but you have revived my faith in the genre!!!! Thank you!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Purple Ghost On: July 10, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome read! I really like the plot! I'd love to read more tonight, but I really need to get some sleep! I never leave reviews...cause I'm lazy like that, but I liked this story so much that I just had to leave feed back!
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Reviewed By: AmberHaze On: July 07, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: tiner On: June 29, 2005 01:11 CDT
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Wow, i really like your story. So far that is. I mean, after all it isn't over :P It's seriously one of the best fan fics that i've read.. and i read a lot of fanfics ^_^. well hope the next chapter is up soon. Again, good job.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 21:49 CDT
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Whoa, awesome chapter. The battle scene is great. Very descriptive and compelling. I totally was sweating it when Inuyasha was battling his own despair. The Kikyo scene was very compelling and I am not such a big fan of hers, but I really felt for her. It shows what a great writer you are if you can make me feel bad for her. I can't wait to see what happens; you have me on the edge of my seat. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work with us.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great climax. Great story. I have enjoyed it and I am sorry for not reviewing earlier. Your writing is wonderful, smooth and articulate. Very few grammar or spelling errors, a true work of art. Anyway, great chapter, it was worth the wait! Can't wait for the battle! Will Kagome make it in time? Will Kouga be allowed past the barrier? Will Onigumo fight with Naraku and keep him from corrupting the jewel? See you got me hanging off my seat!!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 11:35 CDT
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Jaken and Kouga are push overs - but for different reasons - LOL. I can't wait for Kagome to get there - she's going to kick some butt I'd bet! I am eargerly waiting for more - you have them all ready for battle - and I can hardly wait for it!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not logged in) On: March 08, 2005 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I've been pretty much reading your story straight through since yesterday! It's awsome! You have excellent plot ideas and everything is written perfectly, so that it easy to picture how everything is happening in my mind! You really have a knack for writing fanfiction and I have to say that I LOVE the length of your chapters! :) I was on the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading! I found the whole soul-communication very original. I don't think I've ever heard of anyone ever using it. :) Very original! Anyway, please update when you can! Your writing is excellent!
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 01:14 CST
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oh. my. god. this story rocks! ok ill be honest with you. ive seen the description of your story several times and brushed it off, but then i decided to give it a chance and i was blown away.this is amazingly original and very descriptive anf fulfilling. you really give substance in your chapters and dont leave readers hanging.i know you just updated today (yay!) but please update again soon . thank you for writing this, i really enjoy it.
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Title: chapter13
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 15:36 CST
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so interesting this new chapter! Another juicy Inu/Kag lemon.... and poor Souta! so in love but so unlucky! I also hope that the situation between Sesshoumaru and Kagura will improve... I like very much this couple. I'm happy you mentioned the Modena because I live in Modena! ^^ I was really excited when I saw that name for the car... ^^ In Modena are produced the Ferrari and the Maserati, but don't think that everyone here has a car like that... -____-
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 02, 2005 21:59 CST
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loved it, another great chapter. what's gonna happen now that naraku has the jewel?dun dun dun
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Reviewed By: Patchcat (not signed in, too lazy) On: March 02, 2005 17:25 CST
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I've enjoyed this story for a fairly good while and have found it to be a truly captivating piece. The plot is well thought out and engaging, the character interactions flow marvelously, and everything is very well-paced and natural. The only thing I found a problem with was in your most recent chapter, and it's not even really a problem, per se. This is what I found: Sesshomaru's sword is called Tensaiga, Inuyasha's sword is Tesseiga. You correctly identified Tensaiga a couple of times and then you didn't and it got a little confusing. I only point this out because I have enjoyed your work so very much, and I'm sure it was just an oversight -- especially considering how long your chapters are. Well, that's all I have to say for now. I look forward to your next update. Laters, Patch
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 02, 2005 15:51 CST
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Death, devastation, chaos - seems your work here is done!! A very full chapter - If Kaugra hadn't kept it a secret from Sess, then they probably could have saved Kanna - but alas - she wasn't thinking that far ahead. I look forward to your next chapter.
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