| "Untitaled ((Because I can't think of one.))" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Title: huh?
Reviewed By: cutemoon On: June 02, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one is for chapter 3. I have a question. How could kagome take a shower when her house is burned by fire. I doesn't make sense.
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Reviewed By: fireprincess On: June 02, 2005 18:24 CDT
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0.0; I didn't think that it would do that..... *Ish embaressed.* I'll fix it as soon as possible...
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Reviewed By: kittenchow On: June 01, 2005 21:43 CDT
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hey! you have to continue this story!! haha please?? anyways... i just had to point this out cauz it made me laugh... "...looking at the rather bright colored shit and pants..." read it carefully!! hahah but please continue!! thank you
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Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:05 CDT
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So sorry I haven't been on, I've been wrapped up in other things school related. I'm working on my next chapter as I speak, so why I'm wasting time here is beyond me...
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: March 16, 2005 18:08 CST
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hey, dancingpony, she already told you that she didn't fix it because there's other fics that has the same title. She mispelled it volunteerly so it won't be the same as the others. And it's not that easy to find a title ya know. Maybe you can come up with a title easily, but maybe not her. Anyway, now, I'm reviewing for real. Well just wanna say that you didn't update for quite long and that I'm still waiting >.< update soon please?
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Reviewed By: The Dancing Pony [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 19:45 CST
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If you know you misspelled your title, why don't you fix it? Or better yet: Come up with a title! (*gasp* what an idea!)
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Reviewed By: The Dancing Pony [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 19:45 CST
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If you know you misspelled your title, why don't you fix it? Or better yet: Come up with a title! (*gasp* what an idea!)
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 23:56 CST
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mabey you should have InuYasha continue to track her down and finally she give's up but wont mave back in? and the he starts going out with her? and they fall in love? and the naraku finds her on the street? i dont kno but i love the story so far keep up the good worl and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: NOOOOO.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: February 19, 2005 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO.... dont you dare stop typing this fic!!! so you keep up your good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: fireprincess59
Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:57 CST
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It finally is letting me see my reviews. I'm going to say this right now. I don't mind flames, BUT you have yet to read what I have typed. You know who I'm talking to. Now, I know that I spelled it Untitaled, instead of how its supposed to be spelled, which is untitled. The reason being is there are other fanfics that have the same title. I could care less about spelling, and you shouldn't say bad things about a fanfic with out reading it first. Also, flames don't bother me because I get WAY worse at school.
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Title: fireprincess59
Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:52 CST
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Its not letting me see my reviews again. I'm trying my best to write the chapters, but I'm running out of ideas.
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Reviewed By: The Dancing Pony [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 18:42 CST
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First, you spelled 'Untitled' wrong. Second, if you don't have a title, why in all the world would I want to read it? If you can't come up with a title, that tells me that you have very poor creative skills, and so: very poor writing skills. Plus the fact that your reviewers can't spell either, doesn't speak well for you story. //////////// This kind of story is a dime a dozen, and if I've read one, I've read them all. You might want to try somethign a little more creative.
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Reviewed By: kitsune foxfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 17:05 CST
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THIS FANFIC WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM GOING TO DIE OUT OF SUSPENSE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 14:26 CST
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Strange how the things turned out! Kagome transformed herself into a boy... gosh! I think the story is going quite fast though lol anyway. Update soon plz ^^
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 17:14 CST
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yay! you finally update! Well it was good, I liked it. Inu Yasha's already nice with Kagome! I wonder why she ran away. I don't know how many time Inu Yasha's mother and Inu Yasha himself told her she can stay!! Oh well. I hope you'll update as soon as you can!
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