| "Sleeping with the Mob" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2012 21:17 EST
Comment/Review:
Very nice. Wish there had been a bit more backstory but other than that it was perfect. Great job. |
Reviewed By: snowfire2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2010 09:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story and you should most DEFINETLY write more!!! I love this story so much I read a few time over the past four of years and I still never get tired of it..I'm glad it was different from all the other one-shots because it actually had an interesting plot and a beautiful love story :) |
Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: schung19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was my first mob related I LOVED IT!!!
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Title: Congratulations! You've been rec'd!
Reviewed By: The Readers Have Chosen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 13:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations! You've been rec'd! The Reader's Have Chosen is a new fanfiction recommendation community dedicated to finding the best of the best in fandoms across the boards, and sharing them with other authors and avid readers. Your story, Sleeping with the Mob, has been rec'd and is now being voted on in the Weekly Poll (Inuyasha section). Fellow fandom-aficionados will vote for their favorites of all the recommendations, and the stories with the most votes will be posted on the front page. You can find our website at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com You can find the Inuyasha Weekly Poll at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / forum / index. php ? topic = 408.0 Thank you for sharing your work with us!
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Title: You have been nominated!
Reviewed By: Auraki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 14:41 EST
Comment/Review:
You have been nominated at The Readers Have Chosen! Each week readers and authors alike select their favorite fanfiction to recommend for the Weekly Recommendation Poll, and your story has been added to our Poll! The voting will end on Saturday at midnight (PST), and the results will be published on the main website on Sunday. Thank you for sharing with us and good luck! Visit our forum to make your own recommendations or to just to read good fiction. Site (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / index . html Poll (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / forum / index . php ? board = 6.0
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 03:12 EST
Comment/Review:
Man, that was excellent. There was actually a plot, actual love and many excellent lemons. Kudos. Loved it.
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Title: HELL NAW
Reviewed By: BOOTZ41213655 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CAN NOT BELIVE DAT NARAKU & HOJO BET ON A FOOTBALL GAME I WAS TOTALLY SHOCKEDI THOUGHT IT WAS SOMETHING BIGGER THEN THAT I SEE NOW WHY KAGOME WAS PISSED OFF!!! LOVE UR STOYRY!!!!!
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Title: threeshot?
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 15:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
I would consider this as a three-shot. I would rather say three chapters in a story. I suggest you maybe continue on when Kagome has children.
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Reviewed By: Chlorophyllistic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 07:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
v.v Just read....That it's completed... Continue....Dying....D: xD Sorry, I love this though, and I think that you should make further stories of this couple :P Whatever xD Randi
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Reviewed By: Chlorophyllistic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 07:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story! I usually only read fully completed stories, and when I got to the end of chapter three, I screamed in frustration :P Keep up the good work, but don't work to hard. ^.~ Avid Reader, Randi
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 05:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing story... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That was really good and the lemons weren't the same old crap they usually are. YAY! Hooray for you! You rock. Seriously.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirl08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 06:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great and very creative story. your lemons definatley weren't cookie-cutter lemons (thank you!!!) it gets old when the same pattern happens everytime. great writing
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 09:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read both of you fanfiction of In bed with mob and sleeping with the mob. You are truly an exceptional writer. I was hoping that you would continue to write about their children maybe?? It will be great if you decided too..
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Reviewed By: seraphin03 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 00:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!!!... great fic... i would definetly read a sequel of their story not of sess/kagu. ohh.. well... (think about it though). it was great!!
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Title: Relli good!
Reviewed By: Angel_fanficluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay in all damn honesty chapter two i almost cried...or maybe it was just cause i was listening to a sad song..:P its super good...and hot please make a sequel or another story:)
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Adian On: August 04, 2005 10:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. This is amazing. Honestly. The writing is sooo incredable. You have talent. Serious Talent. Best FanFic Ive read in a loooooong time actually.
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Reviewed By: lilcuteangel On: July 25, 2005 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best fic I've ever read. I hope that you can publish another fic that is good as this one. Anyway, keep up the god work and don't give up.
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: AW555 On: July 15, 2005 22:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome story, I love it. PLEASE make more one shots/story/I dk...thingys lol. Keep up the good work ^.^
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 03:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read this a while back and please don't hate me cuz i didn't review. i reread it just now and i luv it even more!. what a neat plot for a "one-shot". i would like to see more short fics such as this from you. i hear you are suffering from writers block and maybe that will help you conquer it. anyhow, whatever you decide to write, whether it be an update on a current fic, or another one-shot, i promise to be ready to devour it...in a good way. *_* thanx.
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Title: HOT!!!
Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just awesome and hot!! Inuyasha was so chamaleonic, from sex god to tender husband to knoght in shining armor to cold and calculate seducer... I just loved it!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 04:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was hot. I don't even have to say anything else and thats rare
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 04:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was hor. I don't even have to say anything else and thats rare
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Title: GREAT JOB
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 17:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is the third story of yours I've read and I am just simply amazed. Where the hell do you come up with this stuff??? Your mind is truly a wonderful thing. ^_^. The lemons were great! you're writing style is still beautiful. This time I caught 2 spelling errors, but that was it, no biggie. Keep up the good work PLEASE! I'm looking foward to reading the assassin when it's done. Later chica!
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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: March 15, 2005 01:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't seem to remember if I've reviewed this wonderful fic or not, but kudos to my favorite author. I decided to check out the author of one the best Inuyasha fic around, "The Ad" (and I've read most of the best ones), and I loved this fic too. The lemon was wonderfully written, and it was a great fic overall. I hope you continue to write these fics, and I love your quick updates. :)
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 01:19 EST
Comment/Review:
I must say that this fic was very interesting. I loved every moment of it and couldn't wait to finish it. Now I must read the other one...
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this was the most hilarious things I've ever writen. The lime/lemon wasn't all that either you've writing muuuuuuuuuuuuuch better ones. I found this to be extremly funny. lol. I can't stop laughing. *rips open shirt* slut! *rips open jeans* whore! rofl. I love you and your writing but this was something else. I don't know...it just wasn't all that. It didn't stay true to the characters at all. It made Kagome look like a tramp. It was uberly funny though.
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Reviewed By: amused_disbelief On: February 08, 2005 16:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
"You betrayed me! You treated me like an object! You use material possessions, like a house or a car, as collateral! Not a person!" - Kagiome to Hojo "You're mine, Kagome. You're mine to protect. You're mine to have. I don't let Naraku near my possessions." - Inuyasha to Kagome ..And she didn't even argue. That's some pretty crappy writing, one moment she's upset about being a posession, next minute it's ok. riiiight. Great characterisation...
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Aewi zu Hasu On: January 18, 2005 11:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've not read wonderful lemon ficcie for a while. This story is really well written!
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of those actually thought through lemons. With ups and downs that kept you guessing. In the beginning I didn't know what to think of Inuyasha, and then I began to trust him a bit till that whole Hojo incident. So in a way, the reader was almost Kagome in trying to trust him. I really liked it. A lot. Great fic.
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