| "Sleeping with the Mob" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 23, 2004 18:17 EDT
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Interesting chapter. I'm fairly sure that he wasn't with someone else, only doing something that he doesn't want her to get involved in. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: katie keita On: September 23, 2004 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally!! the second chappie!!!! i love it keep updatinggg
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: September 23, 2004 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so glad you updated a story! >smiles really big< and i must say that i haven't read any mob/gang stories in such a long time! hahaha wow is this chapter HOT or what?? AWSOME JOB! i can't wait for you next update!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 21, 2004 16:48 EDT
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Excellent opening chapter, looks like this will be a great story. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 13:23 EDT
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hot, seductive and damnit... i want more! i can't wait for the next part to come out. this was really good and way to go with a believable, plausible excuse for her to not touch his ears. but, now that they are mates, she can do it all she wants, ne? great story! ja!
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Title: sleeping with the mob
Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 12:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god i loved it please right more i love stories like this one, are there others like this one? good luck writing more
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Coca *not signed in* On: September 20, 2004 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! That last review of mine wasn't supposed to be there! A bug landed on my kepbord and I tried to flick it away, and I pressed enter instead! Anywho, this was a GREAT one-shot, you are an excellent writer. Very detailed, and highly enjoyable. Hope to see more of your work!
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Title: Wpw
Reviewed By: Coca *not signed in* On: September 20, 2004 21:13 EDT
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Reviewed By: Kim [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank God your back, I thought you had writer's block, too busy or someyhing. (seems everyone has something preventing them from writing) Nice One-shot
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 16:36 EDT
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Excellent one shot! Your lemons are terrific and i can't wait for more of them between Inu-Kag...that couple is amazing. Your work certainly doesn't disappoint..it's just as great as The Ad! Looking forward to part 2
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Title: DAMN^_^
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was like ONE Major sour lemon! ^_~ GO you! I'll try to read your other fic soon! ^_^ you did awesome!
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Reviewed By: myrrdinowl On: September 20, 2004 02:19 EDT
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wow. this rocks and i hope to see the other oneshots soon!!
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: September 20, 2004 02:03 EDT
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please keep going this is really good
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Title: Wow! I love it!
Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: September 20, 2004 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, great fic! I loved it to bits! Great idea...very sexy...and I love how you characterize everyone. I hope you do continue this story because I'm sure it'll be one of my favourites. :)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 00:11 EDT
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cools beans as peas. cool story. you going to continue it?
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