| "Sleeping with the Mob" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kim20021990(not signed in) On: September 30, 2004 11:52 EDT
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Great chapter Kagome having the twins and all. And teh whole Kaede being the other woman, sort of, that was funny. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 11:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I love everyone one of your stories! Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Pan.....err +_+ i guess On: September 27, 2004 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story alot, but the problem is y did you have to make Kagome did the err.... 'bedroom' thing with Hojo!!! *freak out* You could have made it be someone els like.... Inuyasha, or Inuyasha, or maybe Inuyasha!XD(sorry i just love Inuyasha) ps. i read all of your stories, and basically I follow you to every site. Keep up the good work! ^__~(hehe do you like the face?)
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Reviewed By: ~*Sorena*~ On: September 24, 2004 03:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Very hot, and I'm liking the storyline building up....I absolutely cannot wait for your next chapter. You're an extremely talented author! :)
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: September 24, 2004 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>fans myself< crap was that another HOT chapter! hahahaha! you have that writing talent that i don't find in many of the fanfic authors and i'm just so happy to be able to read your writing! so far i think this story is another good projet after the Ad! two classics! i can't wait for you next update! i absolutely love all your stories! keep up the awsome work, i'll be checking at least every day for it!
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Reviewed By: darckinu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 02:35 EDT
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i have so many doubts about this story, i like it, in fact i'm an admirer of you, but where the fuck is this sotry going i think you're great with the sotry or the plot or w/e but i really want to know what's next, keep going
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 02:12 EDT
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Is she in love with him? Is that why she wants to leave, cause she thinks he is cheating on her? Was she pregant before? Is she now. Keep up the good work.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Gemini II On: September 23, 2004 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would put a 20 if they had it. ^_^ This is one of the best lemons I've ever read. I hope you update soon! (Please) Also, I hope Kagome will still love Inu Yasha. And they will get 'into' many more arguments!^_-
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 22:12 EDT
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oooh! the angst! i can't wait for the next chapter and am so glad that you updated quickly. makes me happy! ^.^ hobo is dead? (giggles) good, the bastard. i've never been a fan of his anyway. great job with the story and update soon! ja!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:47 EDT
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Very interesting story. I really like it. Please keep the updates coming.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:40 EDT
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can we say control issues? lol great chap=D
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:31 EDT
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well, you got me hooked. awesome story
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: September 23, 2004 21:31 EDT
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Yay, you posted the next part! (I'm just hanging around everywhere, aren't I? LOL) I enjoyed this one, but I still think the first chapter was my favorite. But there is always the third part! Perhaps you have saved the best for last? *raises eyebrows* Anyway, I can't wait for the next update, so give your muse some overtime pay, okay? ^_^
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:56 EDT
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Oh noooooooo! Don't wanna have Kags and Inu separate.... They need to talk! He needs to find out what's wrong with her...she needs to tell him what she wants. Ooh...but the hot monkey sex is good...please keep up with that...yum!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't let them break up! They are so good together. And why won't he tell her about Hojo being there? She already knows that he was there because he was killed.
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