| "Sleeping with the Mob" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't let them break up! They are so good together. And why won't he tell her about Hojo being there? She already knows that he was there because he was killed.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 23, 2004 18:17 EDT
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Interesting chapter. I'm fairly sure that he wasn't with someone else, only doing something that he doesn't want her to get involved in. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: katie keita On: September 23, 2004 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally!! the second chappie!!!! i love it keep updatinggg
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: September 23, 2004 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so glad you updated a story! >smiles really big< and i must say that i haven't read any mob/gang stories in such a long time! hahaha wow is this chapter HOT or what?? AWSOME JOB! i can't wait for you next update!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 21, 2004 16:48 EDT
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Excellent opening chapter, looks like this will be a great story. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 13:23 EDT
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hot, seductive and damnit... i want more! i can't wait for the next part to come out. this was really good and way to go with a believable, plausible excuse for her to not touch his ears. but, now that they are mates, she can do it all she wants, ne? great story! ja!
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Title: sleeping with the mob
Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 12:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god i loved it please right more i love stories like this one, are there others like this one? good luck writing more
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Coca *not signed in* On: September 20, 2004 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! That last review of mine wasn't supposed to be there! A bug landed on my kepbord and I tried to flick it away, and I pressed enter instead! Anywho, this was a GREAT one-shot, you are an excellent writer. Very detailed, and highly enjoyable. Hope to see more of your work!
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Title: Wpw
Reviewed By: Coca *not signed in* On: September 20, 2004 21:13 EDT
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Reviewed By: Kim [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank God your back, I thought you had writer's block, too busy or someyhing. (seems everyone has something preventing them from writing) Nice One-shot
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 16:36 EDT
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Excellent one shot! Your lemons are terrific and i can't wait for more of them between Inu-Kag...that couple is amazing. Your work certainly doesn't disappoint..it's just as great as The Ad! Looking forward to part 2
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Title: DAMN^_^
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was like ONE Major sour lemon! ^_~ GO you! I'll try to read your other fic soon! ^_^ you did awesome!
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Reviewed By: myrrdinowl On: September 20, 2004 02:19 EDT
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wow. this rocks and i hope to see the other oneshots soon!!
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: September 20, 2004 02:03 EDT
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please keep going this is really good
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Title: Wow! I love it!
Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: September 20, 2004 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, great fic! I loved it to bits! Great idea...very sexy...and I love how you characterize everyone. I hope you do continue this story because I'm sure it'll be one of my favourites. :)
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