| "Sleeping with the Mob" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Title: Relli good!
Reviewed By: Angel_fanficluva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay in all damn honesty chapter two i almost cried...or maybe it was just cause i was listening to a sad song..:P its super good...and hot please make a sequel or another story:)
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Adian On: August 04, 2005 10:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. This is amazing. Honestly. The writing is sooo incredable. You have talent. Serious Talent. Best FanFic Ive read in a loooooong time actually.
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Reviewed By: lilcuteangel On: July 25, 2005 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best fic I've ever read. I hope that you can publish another fic that is good as this one. Anyway, keep up the god work and don't give up.
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: AW555 On: July 15, 2005 22:59 EDT
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Awesome story, I love it. PLEASE make more one shots/story/I dk...thingys lol. Keep up the good work ^.^
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 03:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read this a while back and please don't hate me cuz i didn't review. i reread it just now and i luv it even more!. what a neat plot for a "one-shot". i would like to see more short fics such as this from you. i hear you are suffering from writers block and maybe that will help you conquer it. anyhow, whatever you decide to write, whether it be an update on a current fic, or another one-shot, i promise to be ready to devour it...in a good way. *_* thanx.
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Title: HOT!!!
Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 20:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just awesome and hot!! Inuyasha was so chamaleonic, from sex god to tender husband to knoght in shining armor to cold and calculate seducer... I just loved it!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 04:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was hot. I don't even have to say anything else and thats rare
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 04:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was hor. I don't even have to say anything else and thats rare
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Title: GREAT JOB
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 17:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is the third story of yours I've read and I am just simply amazed. Where the hell do you come up with this stuff??? Your mind is truly a wonderful thing. ^_^. The lemons were great! you're writing style is still beautiful. This time I caught 2 spelling errors, but that was it, no biggie. Keep up the good work PLEASE! I'm looking foward to reading the assassin when it's done. Later chica!
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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: March 15, 2005 01:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't seem to remember if I've reviewed this wonderful fic or not, but kudos to my favorite author. I decided to check out the author of one the best Inuyasha fic around, "The Ad" (and I've read most of the best ones), and I loved this fic too. The lemon was wonderfully written, and it was a great fic overall. I hope you continue to write these fics, and I love your quick updates. :)
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 01:19 EST
Comment/Review:
I must say that this fic was very interesting. I loved every moment of it and couldn't wait to finish it. Now I must read the other one...
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this was the most hilarious things I've ever writen. The lime/lemon wasn't all that either you've writing muuuuuuuuuuuuuch better ones. I found this to be extremly funny. lol. I can't stop laughing. *rips open shirt* slut! *rips open jeans* whore! rofl. I love you and your writing but this was something else. I don't know...it just wasn't all that. It didn't stay true to the characters at all. It made Kagome look like a tramp. It was uberly funny though.
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Reviewed By: amused_disbelief On: February 08, 2005 16:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
"You betrayed me! You treated me like an object! You use material possessions, like a house or a car, as collateral! Not a person!" - Kagiome to Hojo "You're mine, Kagome. You're mine to protect. You're mine to have. I don't let Naraku near my possessions." - Inuyasha to Kagome ..And she didn't even argue. That's some pretty crappy writing, one moment she's upset about being a posession, next minute it's ok. riiiight. Great characterisation...
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Aewi zu Hasu On: January 18, 2005 11:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've not read wonderful lemon ficcie for a while. This story is really well written!
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of those actually thought through lemons. With ups and downs that kept you guessing. In the beginning I didn't know what to think of Inuyasha, and then I began to trust him a bit till that whole Hojo incident. So in a way, the reader was almost Kagome in trying to trust him. I really liked it. A lot. Great fic.
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