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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so i havent read in a while, nut theres work, my sketching, and my own 7 fanfics. thens theres sessho and kagome locking me in my room away from the puter and now i know why. O_O loved chapter 8. it gave me the shivers lol. (sessho) uh has anyone seen my lady? {kag} no. you mean she got out? [yasha] ya i let her on the puter to talk to her sister. :sess & kag: oh no not the puter [y] ya and i got our tea and ramen. my sister-in-law and i are going to read the updates on our fav fanfics. {kag} hey yasha why dont we go out and eat and let lady and sessho have so time together. (sessho) dont leave me with her.... :me: oh sessho... kagome... come here please :sessho&kag: RUN!!! didnt mean to seem as i was making you pull your hair out on my last review. i love your story and no matter what you do to sessy he'll always be sesshy. :) hes never to mean, wishy washy or to gentle. think ill go and watch all three of my yasha movies. :ME: oh sesshomaru heel boy (grins evilly) come beloved and take your punishment like a true youkai. i got the cholocate and whipped cream.(sessho) uh maybe kagome and you, yasha should go get that bite to eat and heres the money for a movie. {kag} just get her calmed down and see if theres a way to hide that story so yasha doesnt see it. [y] WHAT?? HE DID WHAT?? {kag} uh looks like im going to see that movie by myself later sesshomaru-sama [y] KAGOME!!! SESSHOMARU!!! :me: later ppls keep up the good work and review for the great author :)
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: October 15, 2004 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was totally confused at the end of the chapter. Why does Sesshomaru say he will feel all of her emotions more than her and why doesn't Kagome feel guilty about making Sesshomaru hurt? Why do they even discus it.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 19:45 CDT
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Do you mean that throught the mating mark, he will feel her emotions? That could be an advantage for him. He could finally put her fears and anguish to rest. And will she at some time mark him? Update soon.
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 17:51 CDT
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wow, great story.
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw.....that was so cute ^^ the way they were nameing off all their favorites aw...... *blush* and that was a good lemon ^^ a guicky *giggle* well vielen dank for recommending my fic *blush* that was so sweet of you^^ danke ^^ keep up the great work ^^and update soon please ^^ -jinx
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 00:44 CDT
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Poor Sesshoumaru. To be in love with a women and having to wait for her. But then not really knowing where she was. Your story now all fits together. This was very well written. You lemon was good. I love the addition of his tail. Not many add that in. It good for something. Hmm, I wonder if my hubby would go for one? Sorry. Lost myself. Until your update, later.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really a great story! I hope that misunderstanding between them that tool place at the end of the chapter gets cleared up soon. Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow *goes wide eyed* that was....that was...uh ...wow :P ok ok so i haven't updated in a while but i just finished chapter 8 (i think that was the number?) and i sent it off to my bestest buddy/editor tennyo so it should be up in the next couple of days *big smile* great, awsome, tremendous, fantastic job on the lemon ^^ "sexually furstrated" *falls off bed laughing* that was great^^ keep up the great work, update soon please. -jinx psst...did i mention that, that was a great lemon?
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 18:50 CDT
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Ok, so it's Miroku. That's fine. But did Kagome and Sesshoumaru become intimate or just really close. I hope someone soon helps Kagome out. She really needs to get over this slump she is in. Update soon, so I know what everyone is going to do for her. Later.
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggle* great chapter ^^ and what are you talking about :P this was a great chapter ^^ i don't know how you wanted it to come out but it's still great to me ^^ *giggle* keep up the great work ^^ update soon please (i'm getting to mine lol :P) -jinx
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: October 05, 2004 20:08 CDT
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that scene with miroku and kagome in the last chapter was sad .. it makes me want a hug. -_- great story though. can't wait to see what happens next. =)
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: sesshy_baby [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 13:36 CDT
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Wow, this is a great story! I wanna read summore!! *laughs* Like I said great story!!!!!
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Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 15:22 CDT
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awesome keep up the great work update soon.
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
huh? that was odd???? lol :P but good as always *big smile* and froh getan i love to make people happy *giggle* yep 15 dogs all to my self ^^ lol :P great chapter update soo please :P (i just updated^^) -jinx
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