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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 20:45 CDT
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Thanks for your support. I liked your last few chapter. Though I think I would have switched them, less confussing that way. But since you updated with both the confussion was fixed. So now that Inuyasha is reincarnated, what will Shippo do? His got a lot to think about. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: RebaJean [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 18:15 CDT
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I'm adding this to my list of favorites so I'll know when you've updated. I'm enjoying the slightly melancholy flavor of this bittersweet confection.
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Reviewed By: incoh On: October 01, 2004 16:08 CDT
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I started with this chapter and then read from the beginning ^^. What a sad story, and it probably affected me more because I watched Strawberry on the Shortcake. I think you definitely captured Saeki Tetsuya in Jinsei.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: October 01, 2004 15:31 CDT
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I love your story, and can't wait till the next chapter! and jinsei sounds so much cuter than the actual InuYasha. =)
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sort of got lost in the last two chaps, humm, good job though.
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 *not logged in* On: September 28, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was cold. Poor Sesshoumaru, how could Kagome turn down such a sexy beast? It is a mystery to me... Anyway, great story and i loved the update, can't wait fro your next one!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i think if i could give you a 20 for writting style, i would. the analogies, the grammer and the way you present your sentences is something to marvel at. great job on that and i would seriously consider becomming a writter in the future, that is, if you aren't already.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was great. Poor Sesshoumaru. Something tells me Shippo is going to be playing match makers. His experienced, so it's only natural. Kagome is sure scared. What to do when the man that has tried to kill you make a pass. Funny and a great read, update soon.
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol :P i don't sleep so i stay up all night writeing :P anyways great chapter *pout* so sad that kag did that to sesshy *raises hand* i'll gladly sit by him!!!!! lol keep up the good work! and you update soon please ^^ -jinx
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Title: Aweosme!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWw, Sesshy was being kind of a butt-head. ANywho, i really love this tsory and I am really happy with the direction this story is headed. Oh, i just love Shippo. Realyl great story, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well if jinx is not the name then use it for a nickname ;) hehehe. thanx for showing a small tender side to sessho. im glad he decide to tell he shippou was still alive. and hopefully she can deal with what happened to the others a little better then she just did. keep up the great work. {group waves} later (sessho growls) I do not act like that. i'm not wishy washy [yasha] yes you do bro and i'd watch it your mate is keeping tabs on you (sessho) uh..uh.. come on my LORD i'll show you wishy washy laters ppl ;)
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, my real name is Daniy ^^ lol, i don't know why every one calls me jinx *trips while standing still* hee hee anyways keep up the good work! update soon please *big smile* -jinx
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Title: Bad Sessho
Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
{you know i love you but why did you have to be so cruel sessho ugh
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:P yeah you could name it JINX!(what every one calls me) lol. anyways keep up the good work! update soon please ^^ -jinx
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good keep up the good work! update soon please ^^ -jinx
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