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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:41 CST
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Once more, Wufei pulls off a magic trick; slipping into the crack between 01 and 02 and acting a bit like a bridge between them. But I have the feeling things are about to get a looot more complicated. He's falling harder than ever - for both of them - and beating himself over the head with his obligations and stuff, and Heero and Duo definitely have their own problems :P I don't know how you can pull a happy ending outta this mess but I'm dying to find out XD
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 11, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon and keep up the amazing job!
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Title: The thot plickens!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful developments and characterization. And why is the word "mount" so damn erotic?? *g* Panting for more!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 10:18 CST
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Just got a chance to read this. I have just begun to read Gundam Wing fanfics and I like this a lot. Hope there is an update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 02, 2004 06:09 CST
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Update soon and keep up the wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: stardancer On: October 29, 2004 20:47 CDT
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You have to write faster...I can't wait to find out what happens. Great story.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 18:01 CDT
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More Wu torture (don't worry, I love it), and more illustration of how he fits sort of half way between Duo and Heero; heading off a flare-up, or getting Duo to admit why he's hurting after the swimming incident. So, why IS Heero worried? da-da-dum! Cant' wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: priscel * On: October 29, 2004 02:43 CDT
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hmm I wonder that too. Wu Fei really should talk to Heero about his view or understanding of Duo's problems. If Wu had done that a bit more thoroughly then he'll more insight into the situation. And goodie a bar... so prehaps Duo falls into the temptation to drink more there? thanks and can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 19, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS CHAPTER WAS AWSOM PLEASE UPDATE.. NOW
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Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 01:26 CDT
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When you first started working on this, I was worried about the effect on the updates of "Lawless Hearts". However, I'm so happy to see you working on a 1x2x5 that it's okay. :) Both stories are great! I'm looking forward to the next update...
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Reviewed By: priscel * On: October 18, 2004 04:11 CDT
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uhh sorry typo here it should read '...Wu Fei didn't lift his head to him...'
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Reviewed By: priscel * On: October 18, 2004 04:07 CDT
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In Wuffers' end decision of this latest chapter, he reveals just how honorable he is. Bad Heero Bad! hmm heero being the picture of dominant lion ready to pounce on a poor unsuspecting Wu Fei. I wonder if Heero quesitons his actions when Wu Fei didn't left his to him but meerly nodded apologetically? Well he has lots of time to think about his actions and come to a conclusion if the blue eyed soldier isn't really that inhibited by his sleepyness. On the issue of intimacy... hmm nail the window shut gives Duo the security, but being in the receiving position will make him utterly vulnerable... guards down, the most open to anything even if their door is locked and he's with heero... I think that him being dominant in bed may help a little but he in a way is timid.. I dunno maybe the whole intiamcy things is solve a few simple taps of the hammer to nail and Wuffers won't be alarmed by a freaked out Duo the night before he leaves, unless there's something he hasn't told Heero in fear of shame/rejection and wouldn't dream of mentioning to Wuffers because he would fear being considered weak by him for not being able to protect himself? After all he has put himself in danger to protect those nearest to him like he did with Wu Fei on the dock... more please!
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Reviewed By: kimpisces(2lazy2login) On: October 17, 2004 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic! Wufei is under some predicament and when I think that maybe he'll be okay about it, BOOM! Heero drops another boom...though I was okay with the images from the last one lolol Go Heero! Then again, maybe Heero's just horny since Duo won't do anything with him if the room's 'not secure' ...poor Heero *huggles him* Can't wait to see the next chapter ^-^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 17:11 CDT
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Oh boy, Wufei's getting more and more twisted up inside. Mind you, I can't blame him. That was a hot lil' 1x5 moment but I think Heero should have been a bit more detailed about exactly why he wanted Wu to be honest. Was that Heero warning Wufei off? Or something else...? Something tells me he won't be allowed to run away that easily! Whee next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: priscel *nods* On: October 16, 2004 21:37 CDT
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nice! *snickers* uh hmm I see Duo's unknowingly put himself on display and Wufei was looking pretttty hard *snickers some more* SO Heero and Duo haven't been intimate, they haven't taken that step in their relationship that Wu Fei's hentai thoughts had reflected? So does this mean that in the second chapter * i think* when wuffers was in the kitchen and he heard that startled gasp it was Duo and Heero was being the forward one, taking the initiative? AND wuffers was thinking about them all being together... *squeals in glee* oh goodie!! Oi update soON!!!
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