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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 10, 2004 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Wufei that was so sad..I love Wufei...
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 10:45 CDT
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Super chapter. The psychology of what Wu is studying deepens, as does his understanding of the problems. It's a good touch to make him able to realize things about Heero that Duo doesn't seem able to understand. Wufei is a more dispassionate observer. Even though, and this is where it's 'dangerous' of course, even though he's not dispassionate about the people involved :P Ouch. A glimmer of 1x2x5 showing up, but I find it hard to believe Wu would be able to think about inserting himself into that warmth if he didn't feel anything about Heero on his own, as well as Duo. Next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 05, 2004 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this ..Please write some more and update ...Your storie keeps geeting better and better...
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Title: Hooked again
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a beautiful evoked setting! And a very intriguing dynamic between our boys. Can't wait to hear 01's side of things.
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Reviewed By: blaack beauty On: October 03, 2004 10:08 CDT
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Wow! You got to update soon! Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: priscel *hmm* [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 02:48 CDT
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YA! Oh this is going to be torture for Ol'wuffers. but I think they are definitely making progress and I think it was, indeed, a very good idea to ask WuFei for help. Like Wuffers said, Heero is observant. So although Heero wasn't able to help Duo deal with his issues and let them fed his own, I'm sure that he can answer any question wuffers has but not really able to give a psychological assessment without it being biased. The tone Duo gives alot though is self-fault: if there is anything wrong then he's to blame and this may also be linked to the loss of his family twice over...maxwell church and Solo. So this in the beginning had me thinking that Heero is somewhat abusive... but I see now that Heero not being able to help but always pressuring Duo to get better can get the same reaction out of Duo. hmm I'm still has this part of me that is alittle peeved at Heero for the pressure he's put on Duo even if cobalt baby blue is still new to dealing with emotions and isn't in the position yet to fully be capable help duo with his. Whew! that was a lot! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: October 01, 2004 21:05 CDT
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I can see Wufei as an analyst, given his thoughtful nature. No doubt he hasn't any idea what he's getting himself into, though watching Duo's braid dance across his posterior should have been a clue. Can't wait until his talk with Heero and learning what Duo's partner's perspective on the problem is. With three stories going, I'm not sure which one to encourage you to update first, so I'll just say keep 'em coming.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 19:18 CDT
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Oh boy, I see the possibility of a whole truck-load of angst coming this way ^^;; Wu Fei helps Duo start to solve his problems...and give Duo the opportunity to jump into Heero's arms. Cue multiple fracture to Wu Fei's heart. Wahhh! Good chapter, with Wu testing the psychology and barriers before him. I'm thinking Duo's view of Heero as being perpetually annoyed with him is a symptom of Duo's problems, rather than actual fact? Hah, can't wait to see how Heero and Wu Fei handle that conversation; Heero knows Wu's interest in Duo after all. Will he still trust Wu, as a friend first who will have Duo's best interest at heart? Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: Mononoke (mediaminer member,) On: September 29, 2004 05:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, though I think that you tend to lump all of Duo's personality traits into every fic you writ. The serious ones anyways. Mainly he has a hard time with the touching and stuff like that, and I can understand that, I really can. But does it always have to be that way? Why can't you put more integral thought into his inner strength, allthough you could argue that by showing this insecure and paranoid part you are showing his inner strength... But stull, it seems more like you have a specific mind-set against a stronger Duo, against him *not* having major malfunctory issues. I like the way you continued to delve into Wu Fei's characterisms, and how you made him seem more human, and less Heero-esque. Anywho, I love this fic, and all of them really, and cannot wait until you post some more! Gomen for the strangeness of my review!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:22 CDT
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ohh looks good girlfirend. keep writting
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Reviewed By: Dragon23 On: September 27, 2004 10:03 CDT
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Sounds interesting to me.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 17:53 CDT
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Oh, Duo? really? I knew something was up with the gun he had but i never would have guessed so, um does this mean that even though He and Heero are together their love life hasn't gone quite as far as Wuffer's hentai mind has been thinking of pursuing with Duo if he wasn't with Heero? So I wonder how they are going to work around this and why Duo turn to wuffers? Does he, i always had this feeling he does, look up to him/admire him? Duo's probablem with closeness may steam from his child hood, 'cuz he said that he has the most problems or is the most uncomfortable when he's outside, out in the open ya know. And before he was with the other pilots he was on L2 and didn't really have a permnant home type place for such a long period of time until the Orphanage (the safe houses provided shelter no matter how short the stay it was probably more shelter than he'd ever had before Maxwell Church) *sighs* I think may have said the samething/resoning twice but with different wording?! update soon!
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Title: Squeal of joy
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A new Kracken adventure! With my fav boys! Look forward to watching this one unfold. :-)
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Title: Interestant
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story get with each chapter more and more interesant. I hope to see more soon. Good work
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 25, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so sad ..I feal so sorry for Duo!!!! I hope Wu Fei can help him...They all need to love each other.. I just love this story ..Keep going...
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