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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: September 24, 2004 23:03 CDT
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Duo's gun was certainly a hint that he has trouble trusting. I think Wufei is going to have his hands full in this story. What fun!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 24, 2004 22:30 CDT
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Uooo! The plot thickens! I like this fic, update soon and keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: C On: September 23, 2004 22:52 CDT
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Absolutely loved the ficlet, so realistic and well thought out, update soon, you are on my favs
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 17:54 CDT
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A 1x2x5? That's new. But new is good! I'm not a hyper fan of threesomes because so few people can make it work, but this looks like a good start; it looks like Wufei might become a bridge between two personalities that are too disparate, even though they like each other. I can see the Duo-Wufei interaction/attraction. But for the moment Wufei's only interest in Heero is territorial, and some anger on Duo's behalf. I'm curious to see how (and if) that's gonna change. Heero on the other hand seems interested in Wufei for his own sake. Tangled webs...
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Reviewed By: Mono-noke On: September 21, 2004 06:28 CDT
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I really like the way you present Wu-fei in this one! Awesome job!
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Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 23:11 CDT
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I've never read a 1x2x5 fic because I never came upon an author who could execute it well enough to make it believable. You're such a great writer, Kracken, that I'm sure you can pull this one off with flying colors. I really enjoyed the first chapter - I have a soft spot for Wufei. I also like how subtly you portray relationships and emotions. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. :)
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 22:32 CDT
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Please hurry and update. I love 1x2x5 pairings and i am absolutely loving this. Keep up the good work. TaTa
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: September 20, 2004 22:08 CDT
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Well alright! Kracken writes a threesome. I wonder if your other story, Lawless Hearts, had something to do with this one? At least Wufei seems more human in this story. Looks like the three boys might just balance each other out. I'm wondering at the sci-fi label, is that right? Looking forward to reading more of both stories.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 20, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need more ..I love 1x2x5 I wish more people rote them...This story is great..I hope things work out for the 3 of them...put Duo in the middle that is the way to go ..Please update again soon...
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Reviewed By: priscel *scrubs at sleep heavy lids with back of her hand* [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OI!! this is good and I love it from Wuffers POV, Heero's being a jackass to Duo! If they're truly together then he needs treat him better. I'm glad Wu is there to undercut heero's actions. *pouts, thinks Heero's unnecessarily agressive dare i say approaching abusive* well ya know not in the physical, but mentally for Duo and I notices that Duo isn't as sure of himself as he was before. I'm glad though that Heero isn't too threaten by Wuffers but he does seem to get jealousy when Duo pays alittle too much attention to Wuffers even if its just talking and Heero really doesn't care for it. OI I LOVE the descripts of the wcenery and what the guys are wearing! And I'm surprised *blushes* at Duo! He's a damn sexy man but booty shorts! OH i read it wrong not booty shorts *looks sheepish* Yea I'm a hentai, i guess my mind went into the gutter with Duo's legs all out like that *uh I'm talking way WAY too much* so ya know in advance *grins* update soon!
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