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| "Fade and Flare" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] | Title: Awesome Story
Reviewed By: inquisitivetrini [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2018 10:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is fantastic. The chemistry between not only Kagome and
Inuyasha, but ALL of the characters is to die for. I love how when
tension is mentioned, I feel it. When annoyance is
mentioned, I feel it. That's just a testament to how utterly
immersive this story is. The only, solitary problem I have with
this story is that it is tagged "complete" for some reason. I make
it a point to stay away from incomplete stories because I know
myself. Without closure, I get into a maladaptive dreaming kick,
trying to fill in the blanks myself for the next couple weeks. When
I got to the end of this story, I triple checked the search
criteria I used to find your story and it was indeed listed as
complete. Would you mind changing this real quick? Anywho, I have
your story in my favs in case anything is updated, but I will treat
this like all the other amazing, unfinished stories out there like
Shrine Prostitute and such and will assume it will not be finished.
So many great hiatus fanfics. There should be a grave to hold those
tragedies. Nevertheless, I'm still happy I came across your story.
It gives me inspiration for my own. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2017 14:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
It's been over 6 years since I logged into Mediaminer! I have a lot
of email links to story updates of Inuyasha fancfics, hoping to see
the conclusion of stories that I have followed for years, coming on
to decades??. This is one of those stories. I wanted to drop in and
send a word of encouragement to you - you last said you were close
to the end, and I cheer you on to finish this lovely arc. I also
hope that you have been able to utilize your art degree to do what
you wish to with it.
| Reviewed By: Fallenangel7583 nsi On: February 16, 2016 12:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic job! I am so glad you're continuing the fiction! I love
this story; always have and always will. The characters are unique
and yet familiar.I love the set up of Inu and Kagome; seriously
star crossed lovers. Also, after rereading this, I have a new
respect for Kagome and her path to fame, and the choices she made.
I'm happy you're moving this fiction along: as a writer who has
also struggled for the better part of this last decade to finish an
Inu fic, I appreciate the dedication you have to your characters
and plot. Keep up the great work! We'll be eagerly, and patiently,
waiting. Congrats on finishing school! Also, sorry if this spams a
thousand times, mm.org is giving me trouble reviewing.
| Reviewed By: doggieearlover (NLI) On: February 10, 2016 17:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see another chapter pop up! It wasn't too long
ago that I went back and reread from the beginning, hoping that it
would be continued. At least they are back together again (sort of)
and maybe they'll be able to get their act together. As always,
enjoyed the chapter including the tears and tension - and
Sesshomaru almost seemed to have a sense of humor. Congrats on
graduating art school and hope you are very successful - As always
I look forward to more and Best of luck in the world of art.
| Reviewed By: Osnizzap On: October 27, 2015 20:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe I started reading this waaay back when you first started
writing it. I fell off the fanfic wagon years ago, but just jumped
back on this year. I'm so glad I stumbled across this fic again!
This is such a well-written fic! It's a great story, and I love how
you've mixed in real life places and events and musicians! And you
actually do research into what you're writing! Alright, at some
point I'm going to stop gushing over this story, but I really,
truly hope you can finish it. If art doesn't work out for you, I
think you'd have a lovely career in writing. Ugh, such a good
story. I'm gonna remake a MM account so I can follow it. I really
wish I could go to Japan. Any hoo, greetings from Boston, MA!
| Reviewed By: dbzflirt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2015 09:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! I had to read it again because it's been
awhile and I'm glad that I did. I was wondering if Kikyo was going
to make an appearance in the story or not. Can't wait for the next
update!
| Reviewed By: zach On: August 04, 2015 17:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update, happy to see it!
| Title: Still the best!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2015 17:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So happy you're alive and well! and thrilled that your dream came
true to go to art school and you're getting close to finishing your
degree. And I'm very glad you found time to work on this again.
That said, that was a LOT packed into one chapter! And one hell of
a cliffhanger! So much went on in this that I don't even know where
to begin but have to love the way Sango took the bull by the horns
to take care of the problem. Yuka thinks she got what she wants but
probably isn't going to turn out like she hopes. And then Kagome by
sheer accident ends up where she needs to be. Can't wait for more!
| Reviewed By: a On: February 02, 2015 23:48 PST
Comment/Review:
Please please update soon. I love this story so much. It's so much
more interesting and different than all the other stories out
there. I really want to know how they'll get revenge on hojo. It
would be awesome if you could update. I also really want to know
how inuyasha and kagome's problems will get resolved later. It was
so emotional, I really felt for them. I also really like Kagome and
hideto's brother and sister relationship. Its so cute, they really
do care about each other. Again please update.
| Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2013 15:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the July 2013 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.fav.cc/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/winners/2013-2/july-2013/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=116 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=116 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2013 15:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the July 2013 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.fav.cc/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/winners/2013-2/july-2013/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=116 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=116 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Reviewed By: RKR On: July 22, 2013 15:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is by far my favorite piece of fanfiction I've come across recently!!! I am truly a HUGE fan of your writing! The way you've built up the relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha was brilliant. I think everything you've written up until the two of them finally got together was IMPERATIVE in portraying just how deep their feelings are for one another. Even though I strongly disliked Kagome with Hojo, I really appreciated the way you showed your audience that the characters as well as their relationships with the people around them are multidimensional. You didn't make Hojo seem like a boring simpleton with no personality. Instead you've allowed your audience to feel something for the poor guy, even if its just pity (at how cowardly he's behaving!!). He seems like a good-hearted person but the two of them just don't manage to click the way she and Inuyasha do. I also enjoyed how yOu unveiled bits and pieces of inuyasha and Kagome's relationship over the span of the story in an almost torturous manner. Tidbits such as the hair brushing, the way Inuyasha wanted to hang out after his breakup, KFC during Christmas (and the mistletoe!), the light flirting and massages just made their union all the more satisfying when it eventually came. I loved the addition of the character Hideto. He just adds so much more to Kagome's background as a musician and you know you're doing something well when your writing enables us, the audience, to feel the little hint of jealousy that Inuyasha (and Hojo) must feel about Hideto and Kagome's relationship. I also wanted to add that I, even knowing little about Japanese culture, still appreciate how much you stick to many of the aspects of Japanese culture the way you do. Please continue when you can!!! Ive also been writing fanfiction for a LONG time and I know how crazy hectic life can be, especially when you're no longer in high school and free time becomes an absolute treasure. Family, work, and life in general is a top priority! But please write more of this gem when that highly sought out free time presents itself! | Title: Congrats!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2013 06:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an award guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Current nominations can be found at our website: http://feudal.fav.cc/nominations/current-nominees/ If you're interested in becoming a member of our guild, please visit the Feudal Association: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that membership is closed during voting periods. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our guild! -The Feudal Association **Please note that you may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. | Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2013 15:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
It's always great to see another update from you! I reread the last few chapters too first of course. Love this story, love that you're still writing it and loved this chapter. I'm glad Kagome isn't going all 'Bella Swan' about Inuyasha still being gone. Hopefully he comes to his senses soon. I loved all your cultural notes as well and the detail you put into making this authentic. It feels like a true Japanese story. I'm definitely going to keep up with your tumblr for more of your lovely art too. Hope things are well for you as always! - Laurell | Reviewed By: dreamer7890 On: March 18, 2013 18:53 PDT
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Oh wow, it has been a long time since you have updated this! I'm glad it wasn't abandoned! I like this story! Hope to see an update again soon! | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
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