| "Fade and Flare" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 19:06 PDT
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so looking forward to the full chapter - I'm so glad you are coming back to it - Yippee!!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 18:28 PDT
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Cheers! This is an awesome AU, and that's really saying something! I hope you get a chance to finish the previewed chapter soon--it looks like it's gonna be awesome! I'm really enjoying your writing style as well, and I like the flow of your story--not feeling rushed, but also not dragging our feet through the mud. The interactions between Inuyasha and Kagome are excellent--from the comfort of familiarity to the awkwardness of having that one night hanging between them. I hate to suggest things to someone who so obviously knows what they are doing, but I really hope she doesn't take Hojo back. Even knowing that it isn't his fault doesn't make him Mr. Right, or any less boring! Good show!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 21:47 PDT
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I was just turned on to this story. I hope you can come back and finish it. I love it - I do enjoy a good AU so. thanks for sharing your words and vision.
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Reviewed By: Rosiel-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 04:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic! Very well written: ecxiting, sexy and a bit sad.... I', looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 16:00 PDT
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Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 13:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More please ;) when will you be posting the next part i ahve enjoyed reading this very much.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 20:26 PST
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wow! awesome updates! i didnt' catch chapter 10 when you updated, so that was some serious hotness when i stumbled onto that. wow, yeah, voyeristic covers that nicely, but that was...well...hot. lol. i feel awful for Inu to have been thrown through these loops. very interesting show as to how they got grouped together, as well. got to say, Hojo still annoys me, and Yuka being the destructive factor in thier relationship makes sense but still...grr. and now Kagome's probably shits and giggles over her 'ephiany' with Hojo, but bam, gets hit by the mack truck named Inu. wonderfully woven, can't wait to see where you take this!!!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 12:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. Ya know I'm not really a big fan of J-Pop and really my only exposure to it has been that Shining Musume manga floating about on the internets... -_-;;;; ANYWAY, back to the fic at hand, I must say this story is well executed. As others have observed, the prose is crisp, characterization well developed, dialog is lively; really nothing to complain about, just that I kept getting this feeling this was more of a Jem/Inuyasha fusion, but I quickly dismissed it. Heh. Also, your fanart is very well done. Rarely have I seen a fanfic author be able to draw their characters so well. Though your art style looks so familar, have I seen it somewhere else? Just curious. Oh yeah, one thing keeps bugging me. Did Hyde and Kagome ever get physical with each other? Maybe I wasn't really too closely (or maybe too closely) but I couldn't figure if Kagome ever followed through on the whole "friends with benefits" proposal by Hyde. Anyway, good story, I'll be checking in from time to time to see how it's progressing. Good luck! Bastion
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Title: you are evil evil evil
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 08:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
but you write VERY well and you've now got me hooked on a story that I never thought would be this enjoyable. Good work! This particular storyline has been done and done again, but I must admit this is the first one that's been written well and is believable in the sense that K isn't instantly tossed into the situation with no talent or background in music to make it believable. Kudoes to you and hope you update when you can. :D Happy Day!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 19:51 PST
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OMG... Update soon!! Please!!!! Inu and Kag FOREVER!!! They are such the cutest couple. I love your story sooooooo much and think that Hojo's a total ass. But is that just me? Poor Inu, though... get 'em together and QUICK!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Unholy_Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 18:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All, I can say is wow. I am really speechless. This has to be one of my favorite fanfics EVER I love how you've put SOO much work into to it. It is extremely good. And you are one of the BEST writers ever. Please do continue writing. PS. Your arts really good to! Sincerly, Veronica(Aka)Unholy_vixen
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 01:18 PST
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Hello, missed ya, just got my update as this story is locked in as a favorite. Saw your not at the end of the teaser chapter and I hope all is okay with you. Eagerly awaiting the next installment, I just wish those two would get it on already or at least get further than second base. Hojo is an ass and when will we get a little more Sango and Miroku? Well see ya next read.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 10:44 PST
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man...i miss this story. i can't believe hojo..and i love the fact that he's gonna be threatened. man, this is why i have no envy for stars, they go through this ludicrist stuff all the time. no thank you. LOL. wonderful story, as always, and i wish you the best on what came up that is important. update when you can (but don't leave us hanging!). ^__^
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 21:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I am soo glad I found your story again, I made sure to add it to my favorites. I feel bad that Inu is so guarded with his feelings, I know he believes he's protecting himself and Kagome but I think he's missing out too. Also, Kagome seems like she's only rebounding on Inuyasha, he's had secret feelings for her for so long and now it seems she's playing on them. I think that an introduction of another female character with the hots for Inuyasha will push Kagome to admit her real feelings for him and move toward them and pull him out of his shell. Can't wait for the next chapter, SMOOCHES.
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 10:57 PDT
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Ah this story is so wonderful; it never ceases to amaze me. I didn't even know you had it posted on ff so I'll have to go add it to my favorites list ;D Anyways I really liked the chapter; all your character interactions are just so sweet and comfortable. They make me warm and fuzzy inside jk ;p But I do really enjoy reading all your updates and I can't wait to see in the next chapter how Kagome and Inuyasha meet! I love the pictures you've drawn in your own style of the characters too because now that's how I can picture them while I read and they fit so well. It makes for great imagery hehe. Anyways once again you're so very welcome for your nomination. The iyfg is a place that is designed to recognize outstanding work in fanfiction, and I think your story more than meets this! Oh and congrats on the 100 reviews on ff! (You always get more on ff than you do here which is why I review you here hehe.)Hope you have fun in Japan! I'm so jealous of whatever work you do that has you travel there! :p Ja!
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