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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 12:14 CDT
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I loved this chapter!!! Miroku's her knight in shining armor. Heheh. Of course, it would help if Kagome and Sesshou could have had some more time to themselves. Sigh....I have to admit. My favorite part was your description of a topsy-turvey Kagome trying to figure out her problems. Thanks for the update!
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Title: UCAN'T split them
Reviewed By: the soulcollecter On: March 26, 2005 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Basically u need to know that ive been obssesed with seshy/kag fics and this one [save 4 a few gramatical errors} was 1 of the best i have ever read!!!!!!!!! i even 4give u 4 killing Sango. i luved it sooo much i just couldn't stop...somehow i always knew that seshy was ment 4 kag[cuter2] but im so afried inu will come and ruin it..pleeze let kag b happy 4 once and stay w/seshy...just oncePLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE?btw death by power bar lolol;]
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: March 26, 2005 21:35 CST
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Yet another good chapter chica. Oh the sadness of Sango's demise. Tis the only thing i did not like. not so much her death as that it is so totaly unexplained, and Inuyasha would have at least burried/cremated her they were friends after all. I eagerly await thy next chapter. 'Orion
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Title: lmao!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi HA!) On: March 22, 2005 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha ha ha ha Shippo and Miroky get ther before them HA!!! lmao well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!! WHO TOLD YOU YOU SUCK AT TENDER MOMENTS???? *looks around* just tell me where they are and i will force feed them kagome's power bar!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the awesome work. looking forward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 22:18 CST
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Sorry, it was suppose to be 'Apple Dumpling Gang.' Some times I type way to fast and mess up. Anyways way to go power bar. Oh and once Sesshoumaru makes up his mind, there is no stopping him, ne? Keep up the good work, later.
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Reviewed By: FongSaiYuk319 On: March 21, 2005 19:13 CST
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Hey, yeah, it's me again...just wanted to say great job with this chapter....i really enjoy this fic. it's A LOT better than a lot of stuff out there...if i hadn't said that before. but really, keep on doing whatever you're doing, because it's working! -FongSaiYuk319
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Title: *_*
Reviewed By: conrad of the butterflies On: March 07, 2005 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic rocks!! i love every thing about it and think that iy and kouga pairing would be only one of the many great things to come out of your fics! i ned u to update soon!!*_*
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 13:25 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!
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Title: 'Seshos' Flame
Reviewed By: Gabsy On: March 04, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Wusup my name is Gabby and i just wanna say that your writing is a ver good one and please,hurry up wiht the next chapter , i mean really, i have it on my faverites because im afraid i wont be able to see/ find it!Please hurry up!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey your story is really good no i do not think it is sucky i think it very good. I hope you write more soon. LOL INUYASHA'S REACTION WHEN HE HERES ABOUT KAG AND SESSHOUMARU IS GOING TO BE PRICELESS!!!!! update soon please.
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Title: o_O
Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: March 02, 2005 03:13 CST
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WOW chica u totaly get goofy when your up late. Just how much caffinee did u go though on this chapter? LOL when I write that late at night my poor chareaters wind up with major toment but u? nope you make them happy gooffy and silly. Great chapgter by the way. PUPPY YEA!! "Orion
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: March 01, 2005 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope Shippo finds Kagome first! ^_^ that would be so funny and a big dent on Kouga and InuYashas HUGH Egos! lmao well anywho keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: Sesshoumaru's Flame
Reviewed By: FongSaiYuk319 On: March 01, 2005 08:45 CST
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Yo, this has got to be the best fanfic i've EVER read...man, you are a really good writer. I usually don't review stuff....but i was just blown away at how good this was. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 22:35 CST
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i think that decision should be entirely up to you. You would not loose me as a reader if you had a lemon chapter, but i think you should decide! By the way, your revamp at the end of chap 7 turned out really nice! Kudos!
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