| "Sesshoumaru's Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 19:04 CST
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Just when did mm.org start the timed log in. I read one chapter and then review, and then another chapter of some thing and go to review, And the have to log in again. Sorry I was ranting, anyways great chapter. I like the revised part and really laught to the point of tear about Inu and Kouga. If you haven't seen Apple Dumpling Gand lately, you should. There are great slap stick laughter in it. I would like to read a lemon, and if it's your first that bring it on. Updat soon, later.
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Title: YOU'RE TOO FUNNY
Reviewed By: kikyouhater118 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 18:26 CST
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I COULD NEVER THINK ABOUT TIME WHEN HIS HOT LIPS ARE COMING AT ME EITHER.PLEASE KEEP GOING DIEING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 13:08 CST
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great fan fic! I really enjoyed the mental struggle of our main hotty. keep updating! oh, p.s., i really dont think the end of your last chapter sucked at all. it had a nice flow. (just so you know)
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 13:21 CST
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lmao that was really funny keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 04:18 CST
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Well that was a longer chappter I loved the training session. Good intro to her talent. If u don't want to use the word Magic I can suggest talent/gift/power. :P I like gift personaly but hey I'm a Lackey fan sooooo...:D And now to switch into cretique mode(helpful/positive type) I think your moving the relationship between Sesshy and Kagome a bit fast. It seems a little forced and fake. Sesshy hates humans and the only reason he took Kagome is the phycial raction. I love that twist by the way its soo cool and lends its self so well to conflict and comic romance (gets all giggly with anticipation) The thing is I think that Sesshy has accepted it a bit too soon. I would suggest you have him back off and fight it a bit more. I loved that in the previous chapters. Make him resist and grumble and slowly fall for her with out reilizing it :D Don't pay too much heed to me though tis ultimetly your story and you should write what you want. ;) just thought I'd stick my nose in and offer advise to a great author. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 19:52 CST
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Thank you. I loved the whole morning scene. It made the last part actually work out. He kissed her. Yay! Where is Sango? I forgot where you had her at. Oh, and the whole thing with Inu, Kouga and Miroku along with Shippo was neat. Update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: February 14, 2005 17:23 CST
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Rin's adorable!!!!!!! Keep her in the story!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: February 14, 2005 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up, keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up,keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hurry and mak the next chapter soon!!! I can't wait! What happens to Sesshy-baby? Does his pretty face get clobbered?!?!?! Does Miroku have any more of a part? Does Inu-baby know where Sesshy-baby lives?!?!( Hey, cuteness runs in the family. What can I say?) WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 06:17 CST
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o_O inu and kouga? too shocked by the mental image to talk.....it wouldn't be bad i guess. but I'm not fond of youi in Inuyasha. Orion
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Reviewed By: evilsmiley0688 On: January 23, 2005 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello, i really love how funny this story is and am working on a few of my own stories...i just am a bit confused as to why the sudden charctor change is sesshomaru .... well its good any way and im really in a hurry to hear the ending so write faster!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: January 11, 2005 18:33 CST
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YUS!!! UPDATE!!! i like this story, so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: jman303 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful simply wonderful it is better than the actual show more humor more everything plz update soon from a great person, jman303
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 19:49 CST
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Laughter galore in this chapter. And the whole Inu/Kouga thing? Well let's see. I like them as they are right now. They can sort of like Don Knotts and Time Conway or Abbot and Costello. But as a couple well, I won't steer that way. Great bit you added and hope for more.
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Title: luv it
Reviewed By: miroku's wench On: January 10, 2005 17:49 CST
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hi hyatt excel is slowing ridding her fear of internet use at school for not school stuff. she wants to say good job and phew...was that close love da fic, want new chappy, this is the fastest she's eva typed in her life bye!^_^
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Title: Jig time!
Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 17:39 CST
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I'm not to sure what you mean necessarily by throwing Kouga and inuyasha together, but right now it looks like the start of a beautiful relationship/friendship! And all I can think about now is Kouga doing a jig and out tapping the Lord of the Dance (Michael Flaherty?). Heheh. Keep up the good work!
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