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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 20:21 CDT
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OMG!! That story was freakin' awesome!!! It was so well written and was a really good story line! I really enjoyed it!
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Title: Congrats
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 09:29 CST
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beautifully written... congrats!
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Reviewed By: PeRk On: October 12, 2005 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I must say, that had to be one of the best fanfictions I have read in a very.....VERY long time. You made me cry so hard >
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: Moonpie143 On: October 11, 2005 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this fic, thanks for taking the time to post it. I really enjoyed it. But umm.....I didn't really understand the 'Sight', I think I must have missed exactly what the purpose of it was, or how it worked. I thought that he was going to somehow see Kags in the furture (wanting him, or something). I did enjoy how you resolved the relationahip issues Inuyasha had with Kouga and Kikyou. Actually, I enjoyed how everything worked out. Good job!
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: October 09, 2005 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eep! i changed my mind. kagome was in there a lot more towards the real end- it was only for a couple of chapters that she was gone for so long. ^-^ O__O but i liked the ending so much!! ::cry:: ,,o-o,, you give a loveless heart-stolen hopeless person like me... well... hope!! ,,o__o,, thank you.. e-e so much...! ::goes off in a corner to cry::
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: October 09, 2005 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hm.. its okay. theres ... towards the end, lol, there wasn't really much going on with kagome. I don't believe that inuyasha would have gotten scars from being burned from a brand- hes waded in stomach acid before, hes had a friggin HOLE through his body. o_O like.. a hole you could actually see through. also, i suppose it can't be helped, but technically kagura IS already dead. >_> and sesshoumaru was in love with kagura, not rin.. XD ::cough:: oh yeah- and one last thing.. its kitsune HI. hi means fire, im sure you know.. i don't know where in the world this "bi" came from. o_O the japanese translation from the manga is literally kitsune hi. But that wasn't too much of a deal, just didn't make sense. XD um... i haven't read the end yet, its just all your pleas for reviews made me feel guilty, lol. i usually sit down and read everything and then review, but.. >> i made an acception. ^_^ just for you.
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Title: In the end..
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my dear author, you truly know how to write a pain filled story. It is beautiful, sad, frightening, angsty and heartwrenching all in one. And..It. Is. EVIL!!! You left me hanging! ^_^ I hope your muses hang on for just a little while longer, I loved it. You are a talented writer. My thanks to you for this wonderful story that you have shared with us. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Good luck!
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Title: Oh my...
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I suppose I should spend more time reading and less time working, ne? I didn't realize how far I had fallen behind. As always, your story is wonderful. The cruelty and inujustice will be set right soon, won't it? I guess I'll have to read to find out! Thanks again for sharing your wonderful and powerful stories with us!
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Reviewed By: tinky On: May 14, 2005 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW CAN YOU JUST END IT LIKE THAT!!!! please update soon, its driving me crazy. your story rocks!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 13, 2005 09:11 CDT
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Aaargh. Poor Inuyasha! Great chapter as always. Please remember him Kagome. I'm on the edge of my seat with worry and anticipation. Thanks for updating and sharing your work!!
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Reviewed By: sakurakessho (too lazy to log in) On: May 13, 2005 01:36 CDT
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AND YOU JUST LEAVE IT THERE!!!! SO not fair! *cries while applauding* Magnificant work! You are so very talented! *cries agian* I want my fluffy-ness!! *whines* j/k...you are seriously a good writer!
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Title: Needing It
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE it please PLEASE write more and update REALLY SOooooon.Greate Job "AWSOME"
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 27, 2005 20:35 CDT
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Thanks for another great chapter. How I think the story's going to end? Let's see.. I have four possible endings. They all involve everyone in the fudal era meeting up again at Naraku's castle, combining forces, and fighting Naraku. Here's where the four endings differ. In the ending I'm hoping for, there's a huge fight but in the end Naraku is defeated and everyone survives. Kagome figures out how to come back through the well, she and Inuyasha make up, and there is much fluff and happiness. Probably not gonna happen. A more likely ending, in my opinion, is they fight the big fight and defeat Naraku but at a terrible price. Lots of characters are dead and Kagome and Inuyasha never get to be happy together. Aww, now I've made myself sad. A third, more remote possibility, is that this is part of the hallucination generated by the initial zombie monster. In which case there might be a happy, fluffy ending. A final scenerio involves the defeat of Naraku and then a wiser, more patient Inuyasha waits 500 years to see Kagome again. I'm really rooting for happy, fluffy choice number one. My money, however, is on the sadder choice number two. Thanks for sharing this great story with me. I've really enjoyed it (even though it makes me cry). I don't usually read the sad fics because it really bothers me when people are sad (even cartoon people - I know, I'm such a baby) but this one is really well written. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: sakurakessho (too lazy to log in) On: April 27, 2005 00:25 CDT
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Very well written. *applauds* I think the story will end with one hell of a bloody battle. It's got to. This is Naraku we're dealing with. And it seems to me that this is a waay more powerful Naraku. So Inuyasha might not win this one. No one, no matter how strong they are can win every battle they come up agianst. There is however, this teeny tiny part of me that knows somehow Inuyasha will win. Will probably be joined by Sango and Miroku. Kagome...I have no idea what you're planning with her. I just hope that everyone in this fic has a good ending. Not necessarily a happy ending...but a good one.
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Title: Ummm.
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not even going to try and make ideas just appear. I couldn't as it is your story. I have to say though, I am particularly nervous about what the next chapter holds. I love it though, Kogas death was so tragic, yet so noble. InuYasha did the one thing he ought to have done for the ookami, he gave him an honrable death. Now he seeks to destroy that which threatens his friends and country. All right. On to the next chapter. You are so good at this. I absolutley love it.
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Title: Amazing!!!
Reviewed By: ioialoha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The book Kagome is reading is what InuYasha's flea demon assisstant is always writing in, isn't it? If that's the case, then this is how I think it will end: Kagome finishes the book to realize that the great Lord Inu is killed by the monsterous demon. She remembers who the silver-haired man is, and returns to feudal Japan to help in the final fight, and to heal two broken hearts. How romantic... ^^ But dang, please do it soon!!! Good story!!
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the emotion you put into this story. It is so POWERFUL! I truly can't get enough, its depressing, happy and angry all in one. I have to say its definatley one of the greatest there is! You have a way with words and an imagination that suceeds even the best authors! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!
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Title: ppl may read but there all assholes!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 26, 2005 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i kno it only takes less time to write a review then it does to make ramen!! ^_^ (yumm Inu's not the only on who loves the stuff i live off it!!!) i can't guess the ending you've write it so well i'll probably fuck it up with my thinkning so i'll just wate till you put it out and i love you story keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: Needing It
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot take this any more I CAN'T STAND Kag not being in the storie w/out being w/ him when is she going to go BACK.Please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me And update and write more soon.
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Title: what?
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 14, 2005 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what journal is it the book Kagome is readingin her time? well i really reall liked it keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: notzathros aka laptawenzell On: April 14, 2005 08:19 CDT
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Poor Inuyasha! I'm really hoping for a happy fluffy ending for him (and Kagome). Sango and Mirou have proven themselves to be true friends! He certainly owes them a heartfelt thank you. I hope things turn out for him so he can stop punishing himself (and his friends) and be happy with the person he loves. Thank you for the chapter! You are on my favorite author list and I look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: silvertsukuyomi On: April 13, 2005 23:58 CDT
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you up and leave with a one-shot like that?! Knowing full well that we all need the next chapter! gyah! I hope you do continue to update. It's really a fantastic story. Very angsty. I love it. You've just got to write more...you've got to!
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Title: Oh my...
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 00:21 CST
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I really don't know what to say about this one. It has me in tears if you want to know. You are very talented. Please, don't end it like this. Something has to be set right. Anything. She has to remember him from the story right? Come on! CUT ME A BREAK HERE!!! Excellent work though. Very well thought out and written!
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Title: Please...Please...Please.
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me you're not ending it there! You've come this far, so tell me the rest! I've noticed you update about once a month. I will wait as long as it takes for the next chapter, but please don't end it here! You are definatley one of my favorites! Please keep up the good work and UPDATE!
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Title: Good Heavens!
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And everyone thought my story was angsty! I don't want to sound twisted or anything, but this is really good. The pain is almost real as is the emotions that lay therein. Excellent work as always!
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Title: *Whew*
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. The way you described Kagome's personal angst was just, astounding! You had me going there for a minute. That was an awesome piece about InuYasha's gift to Shippo. It truly shows what could never be spoken. Excellent work. 10/10
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Title: Emotionally distruaght
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this chapter while listening to the english version of Every Heart. I am absolutely crying my eyes out now. Excellent work. *sniff.* Excuse me please, I need a tissue...
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Title: That was just... Sad....
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. You've done it again! You managed to master a hidden emotion between Kagome and InuYasha and make it come to life. I actually had tears! That is pretty good when your story can make the reader truly feel the emotions of what is taking place in the story between the two characters. Excellent work!
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is one of the most detailed stories I've read yet! Not only that, but it seems to capture the chemistry between the given pairs, plus their fears are truly notated. Wonderful work! Excellent story line!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 23, 2005 10:05 CST
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Thank you for a fantastic chapter. I am addicted to this story and relish every update. I don't have any suggestions of note. Your character development is great, the writing flows well and spelling and punctuation are good. Eagerly looking forward to your next chapter!
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