| "Needing It" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: sakurakessho (too lazy to log in) On: April 27, 2005 00:25 CDT
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Very well written. *applauds* I think the story will end with one hell of a bloody battle. It's got to. This is Naraku we're dealing with. And it seems to me that this is a waay more powerful Naraku. So Inuyasha might not win this one. No one, no matter how strong they are can win every battle they come up agianst. There is however, this teeny tiny part of me that knows somehow Inuyasha will win. Will probably be joined by Sango and Miroku. Kagome...I have no idea what you're planning with her. I just hope that everyone in this fic has a good ending. Not necessarily a happy ending...but a good one.
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Title: Ummm.
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not even going to try and make ideas just appear. I couldn't as it is your story. I have to say though, I am particularly nervous about what the next chapter holds. I love it though, Kogas death was so tragic, yet so noble. InuYasha did the one thing he ought to have done for the ookami, he gave him an honrable death. Now he seeks to destroy that which threatens his friends and country. All right. On to the next chapter. You are so good at this. I absolutley love it.
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Title: Amazing!!!
Reviewed By: ioialoha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The book Kagome is reading is what InuYasha's flea demon assisstant is always writing in, isn't it? If that's the case, then this is how I think it will end: Kagome finishes the book to realize that the great Lord Inu is killed by the monsterous demon. She remembers who the silver-haired man is, and returns to feudal Japan to help in the final fight, and to heal two broken hearts. How romantic... ^^ But dang, please do it soon!!! Good story!!
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the emotion you put into this story. It is so POWERFUL! I truly can't get enough, its depressing, happy and angry all in one. I have to say its definatley one of the greatest there is! You have a way with words and an imagination that suceeds even the best authors! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!
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Title: ppl may read but there all assholes!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 26, 2005 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i kno it only takes less time to write a review then it does to make ramen!! ^_^ (yumm Inu's not the only on who loves the stuff i live off it!!!) i can't guess the ending you've write it so well i'll probably fuck it up with my thinkning so i'll just wate till you put it out and i love you story keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: Needing It
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot take this any more I CAN'T STAND Kag not being in the storie w/out being w/ him when is she going to go BACK.Please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me And update and write more soon.
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Title: what?
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 14, 2005 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what journal is it the book Kagome is readingin her time? well i really reall liked it keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: notzathros aka laptawenzell On: April 14, 2005 08:19 CDT
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Poor Inuyasha! I'm really hoping for a happy fluffy ending for him (and Kagome). Sango and Mirou have proven themselves to be true friends! He certainly owes them a heartfelt thank you. I hope things turn out for him so he can stop punishing himself (and his friends) and be happy with the person he loves. Thank you for the chapter! You are on my favorite author list and I look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: silvertsukuyomi On: April 13, 2005 23:58 CDT
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you up and leave with a one-shot like that?! Knowing full well that we all need the next chapter! gyah! I hope you do continue to update. It's really a fantastic story. Very angsty. I love it. You've just got to write more...you've got to!
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Title: Oh my...
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 00:21 CST
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I really don't know what to say about this one. It has me in tears if you want to know. You are very talented. Please, don't end it like this. Something has to be set right. Anything. She has to remember him from the story right? Come on! CUT ME A BREAK HERE!!! Excellent work though. Very well thought out and written!
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Title: Please...Please...Please.
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me you're not ending it there! You've come this far, so tell me the rest! I've noticed you update about once a month. I will wait as long as it takes for the next chapter, but please don't end it here! You are definatley one of my favorites! Please keep up the good work and UPDATE!
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Title: Good Heavens!
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And everyone thought my story was angsty! I don't want to sound twisted or anything, but this is really good. The pain is almost real as is the emotions that lay therein. Excellent work as always!
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Title: *Whew*
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. The way you described Kagome's personal angst was just, astounding! You had me going there for a minute. That was an awesome piece about InuYasha's gift to Shippo. It truly shows what could never be spoken. Excellent work. 10/10
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Title: Emotionally distruaght
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this chapter while listening to the english version of Every Heart. I am absolutely crying my eyes out now. Excellent work. *sniff.* Excuse me please, I need a tissue...
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Title: That was just... Sad....
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. You've done it again! You managed to master a hidden emotion between Kagome and InuYasha and make it come to life. I actually had tears! That is pretty good when your story can make the reader truly feel the emotions of what is taking place in the story between the two characters. Excellent work!
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