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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is one of the most detailed stories I've read yet! Not only that, but it seems to capture the chemistry between the given pairs, plus their fears are truly notated. Wonderful work! Excellent story line!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 23, 2005 10:05 CST
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Thank you for a fantastic chapter. I am addicted to this story and relish every update. I don't have any suggestions of note. Your character development is great, the writing flows well and spelling and punctuation are good. Eagerly looking forward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 21:52 CST
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Thank you so much for updating! I dearly love this story. I'm glad that Inuyasha has found some degree of peace though I'm really hoping this all ends with a fluffy Inuyasha/Kagome reunion with lots of making up. Thanks for the great update! I eagerly await the nest chapter.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 12:13 CST
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Please update soon this story is slowly killing me inside!
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Reviewed By: Raina1 On: December 07, 2004 18:43 CST
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Such a well-written saga! Don't tell me this is the end!?
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really a great drama. I wanted to cry and plead InuYasha to please reconsider. Please update soon I don't think my already frail emotions can take much more sadness, but I need to know what is going to happen next. This is very well written.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: December 05, 2004 21:52 CST
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Just checking back to see if there was another chapter yet. Once again, LOVED THE STORY! Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil!!!!! You are EVIL!!!! I've never cried so much over a fic before, such saddness such heart break. Hell, you broke my heart!!!! You evil, evil person you!!!!! You could you write such an evil sad peice of fiction!!!! *takes a deep breath* Now that, that is out of my system I must say this is one of the best fics I've ever read. Nothing has ever gotten me to actually feel the emotions of the characters as you have done for me. I'm not kidding when I said I was crying, my face is drenched in tears. I can sincerly and honestly say that I shall be searching every day for your next update, for nothing I have ever read before has gripped me so well, leaving me trembling and aching for more. Well done! ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 29, 2004 23:36 CST
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Wow! So sad. I certainly hope you find it in your heart to write more and perhaps bring about a happy ending. beg, beg, beg...
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Title: *cry*
Reviewed By: Katnix On: November 18, 2004 03:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to write more! im practically sobbing! i never get this caught up in a story. please please please write more i dont think ill be able to sleep till its finished! its just so sad. will Inuyasha go back and get her? will she somehow get through the well? the gomenasai thing is what really got me though, maybe he could write more to her in his time and it still be there? (cries) omg i just got the saddest mental image of shippou carving the word mother into the well! dammit! im all blotchy now. well take it as a sign youre writing is good, if you got me this emotionally riled up you write pretty well. if you write more or decide to post it at a different site please contact me at katnix13@hotmail.com. i would really really really appreciate it. ~Kat
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Title: awwwww
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 01:48 CDT
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What a sad story! I hope it has a happy ending! Please update soon!
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Title: so sad
Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so sad but i can't wait to find out what is going to happen next....please update very soon.
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Title: same
Reviewed By: treter On: October 08, 2004 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story please keep adding some more chapters
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 23:52 CDT
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Wow....Update soon please. Thanks.
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Title: Watch me wipe the tears from my eyes
Reviewed By: celesvictoria007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. You have an incredible talent for writing. What the characters were feeling, I felt, and I empathize. Please write more, my soul needs to feel like this again,
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