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Reviewed By: CC On: November 08, 2004 19:39 CST
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Yay, you updated just for me!(Yea, so I'm a little delusional). I'm still loving this fic. Crawford as a farm kid... I don't think I've ever heard that before. Very interesting. Here's hoping you'll update again soon!
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Reviewed By: mel^_^ On: November 05, 2004 17:05 CST
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I'm always happy when this fic gets updated, it's one of my favorite works-in-progress. Motto motto onegaishimasu!
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Reviewed By: CC On: October 14, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Wow, I'm really enjoying this story. I hope that you will write more soon, I kinda hope that they all survive in your epiction. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: indentured On: October 13, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting fic u got going on here...i beleive the grammar/spelling was actuall on point, but due to negligent skimming on my part i rated it one down just in case (^^ srry srry)--but anyways...intriguing in the sense that the two enemy teams...are FRIENDS? wow...ok. style is a bit abrupt--but very concise which is extremely helpful to the reader. nice job on conveying the relationships between shu/nagi+yo/shu.. keep up the good work, update soon--cant believe this didnt get more comments--ppl are too cruel.
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