"The Model Village" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 00:54 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 10:16 CST Comment/Review: I'm sorry I have missed some of your updates, but I was so busy. I really love this story and can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Bastosi On: January 24, 2005 18:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ....lol, Yash the purring is great,.. it was hillarious!!!!! hehehehehehehehehehe
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 16:17 CST Comment/Review: Interesting....Well I think you went for the typical hollywood ending, but that's always ok. I hope you do write an epolouge because there is a lot of questions to be answered. Again, very interesting...
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 20:23 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Wow, this is so good, and such a cliff hanger! I can't wait to see what happens next ^_^!!!
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Title: LOL! Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 15, 2004 21:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can imagine what fluffy would say if he saw that. (Fluffy is a gay Sesshoumaru, WAY emotional, cries all the time, and is as dense as hojo, he loves makeup, and he likes to give emotion and beauty advice, WAY OPPOSITE of Sesshoumaru...) "AH! Like, omg, what did you do!? AHHHHHHHH!!!"-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 12:25 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ITS SESSHOMARU!!!!!
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Title: IT'S KOUGA Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 06:23 CDT Comment/Review: KOUGA KOUGA KOUGA, GIMME MY COOKIE
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 01:30 CDT Comment/Review: *does little dance for you* you go girl!! that chapter rocked ^^ :P great work and update soon please *gets on knees and bags* -jinx
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Title: YAY an update ^^ Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (To lazy to login) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 13:55 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: very sweet chappie, and sories are always sappy in the beginning girl! No one takes notice to that, 'cause the first chappie of a story is always the chap where everything needs to explained in in a simple fast way. Means: sapyy-icky stuff ^^ ... and your first chap wasn't sappy, and this one wasn't either! well besides Hobo, but the poor guy is just like that (wouldn't it be scary to meet some one like him ... ullggg he sounds like my ex *puke*) owh well ^^ so cute inu has bin found ot! I love this story, like a fairy tale ^^! please update soon, and make longer chappies please! It's such a dissapointment when i finish the chaps so soon! K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo *kisses top of mini figure-inu yasha's head* he's just so cute! ^^
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Title: Kawaii Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (I don't re-call EVER using the login button) On: October 16, 2004 04:57 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: So far so good girl! I like the start of the story, it has a good twist into it. Most stories are all the same (yes that includes mine so people put away your pointy objects you want to trow at me). So cute I wanna see the small Inu figure haha, can you make a fanart of him or something?! It would be so cute! I also like the style your typing things down, not to much in detail, just enough to keep it fun ^^ When I finally login I'll surly put it in my fav. list! ... well gotta go time waits for no man ... err in this case woman ^^" Bubai, K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Title: polish accent back! Reviewed By: DJ Inuyasha logged out On: October 15, 2004 19:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Pardon my "French Clothing industry" but FCUK! I think that's what it's called- whatever. LOL! That like, totally rocks my socks. You have no idear!!! I'll send the first chapter to this new fic, it was too cool for your school- even if you don't go to one *shrugs*
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 03:48 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh my god girl!! this is so cute ^^ i love what you said about his little tiny brain lol :P that was great ^^ keep up the great work and update soon ok ^^ *hugs and kisses* love ya -jinx
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