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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! And OoO! That was unexpected. But at least Fujita isn't carrying Sesshomaru's child, that was my first idea in the earlier chapter, but now it seems stupid. Yay! You updated. You can take as long as you need to write a chapter. If I hadn't known about Naraku, then I would feel a little sad for him, but then again, amaybe I shouldn't since he killed Inuyasha. He did kill Inuyasha right? I think that Sesshomaru was a bit too much possessive with Kagome. Happy President Day!
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mirasaki K storyteller of beauty and soul inspirational {s}we helped with it(k)were not sure about proper technic[y]feh too mushy+m+nah just right*san*lecher&suck up:me:thax for the prez loved the whips for san&yes im showing him the valentine traditions{s}^_0 hehehe:me:love the chappie so glad to have u bad writing poor kag to be treated like that but alas sessho didnt know and fuj aint talking(k)maybe someone should slap her or dump cold water on her to make her snap out of it[y]a bit of roughness never hurts anyone*me&k blush*{s}*snickers*we know a lot about that one:me:shut up just wait til sessho realizes what he did is wrong twice now hes hurt kag one of theses days his dream might come true[y]did u see naraku cry lol like a baby ha knew it ^nar^i did not*sniffs*[y]then whatcha doing now^nar^nothing fool i just stubbed my toe on teiya's cedar chest:me:&what were u doin in my room^nar^left u a present my love{s}i will kill u stay out of my room:me:uh thats my line(k)give it up teiya u know hes going to fight anyone for any reason{s}&this one is because he entreated onto my domain*san*i thought it was her house:me:take them&do something please saki it almost makes me wish for kikyou back@_@*whole group*WHAT???:me:i said almost yeesh dont have a fit by the way when is good ol' sis comin back?she still trying to get naraku?last of all fujita wake up kag saved your life be so kind as to be nice to her love ya lots saki waiting patiently for new chappi |
Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been trying to reveiw your story over and over, but it just seems to stop working. Shall I type it again, you are a talented writer and #1 in my list. :D I hope you'll continue the story. I'll be waiting.
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your last chappie was great even w/all the gory details.never change a thing its your story.now as to this chappie,poor kag having to kill all those men.{s}i told you i wasnt a softy:me:what about the end of the chap{s}damn that woman*growls*:me:thats ok maybe she should know what you got her for xmas, its *sess pounces on me*{s}shut up woman[y]uh brother i wounld it i was you(k)i think we should leave the happy couple alone.she'll catch him eventually.*watches me run after sess w/iron skillet*wow i couldnt believe how cruel sess was having me kill those brave men. but fujita was right i wasnt ready for it.wow did you see sess get all sappy at the end @_@ hey what was that for{s}*yells*shut up you wench:me:dont you call her that*bam*{s}@_@[y]heheheh can i have a go now:me:no he'll be fine just make sure hes nice & sappy lol.we all pitched in & got you this*points to bags*pocky, lots and lots of chocolate.uh miroku sent you pics of him & yash sent some ramen[y]hey thats mine:me:nope its saki's now.i hope you have a very merry xmas & happy new year. im gonna introduce sessho to a few new year traditions my style(k)uh i dont think i wanna know[y]uh teiya why is sessho grinning like that?:me:*blushes*{s}cause she already introduced me to a few of her halloween traditions:me:be quiet besides you liked playing some of those games{s}never said i didnt.*grumbles*i guess i should say you did well on this chapter.*k&y fall over in shock*:me:see he is a softy see u n |
Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 04:31 CST
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NOO!!! i was really getting into it!!! i should have gone to bed hours ago but i wanted to read this so bad, tis very very good. i really like that way you describe things and use the proper names of the swords. lots of people just say sword. kinda cheesy if you ask me. anyways you NEED to update! i comand you! lol or i shall smite you with my smiteing powers! hehehe
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) Thank you so much for updating the story. And Sesshomaru was so kind to Kagome.The war however was fine, you just happen to have a very amazing athuor that has described a very bloody war with very fine details. please update soon, I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.
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Title: Another good chapter!
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead...not logged in On: December 12, 2004 01:35 CST
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Oh, I didn't think you were stealing ideas, I just saw the similarity and wondered if I had found another fan of that book. Anyway, this is another great chapter, and I'm really enjoying your story. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my dear Lady K you warm my heart with your praise.but i'll always reveiw when i get my chance dont worry.&no i dont think sessh is a good nurse either{s}i heard that wench:me: ^_^ what?{s}*growls*:me:i thought so as i was saying i loved the lil poem you had as the AN &i dont think this cahppie was too angsty it was war CARPIEM DIEM*evil laugh*so you going to make him sappy huh?hehehe{s}NO this sesshomaru is never sappy:me:really...and thats why you got me those chocolates and my books for christmas{s}i never... wait those were for christmas:me:oops *laughs and runs while sessho chases*(k)poor me well fijita was right the war did freak me out. [y]so sessho is going to get sappy huh this i got to see{s}shut up you welp[y]catch me if you can *runs*(k)children*shakes head*hey teiya whens dinner?:me:its in the oven(k)ok i'll save some for you liked the chappie &fujita seems really nice but why does she let the other demons talk about her like that?see ya later:me:ya puter back *claps*man i can think of some evil things to do to sessho*rubs hands evilly grins*[y]uh brother i think your woman is planning something{s}she usually is sometimes its good,sometimes evil &sometimes very pleasurable[y]i didnt need to know that{s}should i be worried?[y]with that grin i think so:me:i wonder if when said &done will she ended up killing him like he keeps dreaming?*sighs*next chappie please ^now back to our regular scheduled program^:me:ok who gonna beat the other 1t(k)dunno |
Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhh! I can actually see Sesshomaru killing all those people! That not a very pretty picture althought it very bloody, but at least kagome isn't going into the fight, yet? please update your story.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: December 08, 2004 15:51 CST
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awesome story. I can't wait to read more. =)
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
+mir+ so i distract you huh? lets see...^san^ get away from her +mir+ aahhhh help me *runs*{s} ha finally im acting the way i should be, why is this sesshomaru being nice to the human?(k)cause you like me in this fic thats why[y] o shut up (k) youre just mad that saki likes miroku more than you[y] *growls*{s} yes go away mutt[y] i wouldnt gloat saki seems to like miroku a bit more than you too {s} O_O :me: excuse me this is my puter let me write &let her know im still here to read & review (k) but we had it 1st &... :me: yes this i know BECAUSE I had to work to get money to pay the bills to use the internet & the electricity to run the puter now as i was saying {s} dont forget to praise her woman :me: *growls* look here milord I AM NOT WOMAN I AM TEIYA TEI-YA [y] i am woman hear me roar @_@ *smacks yasha* k/mir/san/sessho* *laughs* :me: whats so funny *growls* O_O nothing its just you hit yasha &... he... @_@ *me smacks all* if you keep this up you all can cook for yourselves the next holiday #everyone# NO.... :me: as i was saying *bows* gomen gomen so sorry Lady Saki K i humbly beg your forgiveness they changed the mall hours & i work longer & sleep less *sigh* now about the new chappies ^_O oooooooooooo love them love them poor kag but she finally got away from kikyou &naraku for now so sessho let her join his army poor sessho & kag i like this new character fujita shes great kinda jealous but now liking kag (uh maybe a lil???) (k) ?_? he |
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 19:30 CST
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Your story is very good. The only thing I would say is that you should find a beta because you have a few spelling and grammatical errors. Besides, that, I think that your story is incredibly well written, and I would urge you to continue with it. I am wondering if you have read Joy Luck club? Parts of it seem reminiscent... not that I think your story is unoriginal in any way. It's very good! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 12:44 CST
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I really did like this chapther, but when Fujita said that to Kagome, did she mean it as in a boyfriend/girlfriend way? Cause I'm kind of an ookkaaaayyyyyy way. Update soon, Thank you.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: December 05, 2004 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So...Fujita has a thing for Kagome? Or was she just saying that?
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Reviewed By: ame-chan (not logged in) On: November 27, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really, really captivating story! Please write more!!
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