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Title: Kizu
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: KICKS ASS
Reviewed By: alarnia On: September 13, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yes Fujita being A guy would really explain a lot of things. the boyish hooting in the beginning, and her-HE! coming on to kagome. always thought there interactions went a little too far for girl to girl friendship... ^_^;
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Reviewed By: ash211 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 22:34 CDT
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I have been following this story since it first appeared here and I have thouroughly enjoyed it, I was wondering if it was going to remain unfinished or if you still had plans of working on it. :) Here's hoping to see new chapters.
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Title: Kizu
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah On: March 24, 2005 08:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an engrossing and thoroughly enjoyable story. I find the characters believable and LOVE the sudden revelation that Fujita is actually a male. I look forward to seeing how this plays out in view of Sesshoumaru and Kagome's emerging feelings for one another - and it does quite explain Fujita's attraction to Kagome. Thank you for making a grey winter day MUCH more enjoyable!!
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now it really is like the saying.It's not what it seems, and the other saying don't judge a book by it cover. That was such a big shocker to me!O.O Fujita is a boy, now that I think about, that's just seems wrong to me, because in the last chapter Fujita tried to kiss Sesshomaru. And if Sesshomaru already knew that Fujita was a boy, i don't think that he would've held fujita like that. Aww, poor Fujita, I also feel sorry for fujita, because he still has to live like a femalee when he's a male, and he was being bullyed by the people. please take you're time to update the story, but don't give up on it. Happy 6 days before Good Friday!
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Title: Kizu
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 12:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 19:06 CST
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I reread it, And in the beginning chapters Fujita, would've seem like a potential friend now turns out to be like an over jealous girlfriend. humph...just like the saying, things are not always what they seem. Fujita and Sesshomaru almost seem to be like past lovers, well at least that's what i think it's like. continue taking your time to finish your latest chapter.
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 19:06 CST
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I reread it, And in the beginning chapters Fujita, would've seem like a potential friend now turns out to be like an over jealous girlfriend. humph...just like the saying, things are not always what they seem. Fujita and Sesshomaru almost seem to be like past lovers, well at least that's what i think it's like. continue taking your time to finish your latest chapter.
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Reviewed By: Paris--switching sites for a change On: February 21, 2005 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tThank you for another devastatingly breathtaking chapter. Yes, I completely forgive you. Sometimes life gets in the way can't change what's going on no matter how much you would like to. Very understandable I am just glad to see the newest addition to the story. I actually read through it twice. It was even more beautiful the second time. There is just so much fine details that one might take for granted or simply pass by with out a second thought. I love your word choices too-I feel as if you must choose them all very carefully for they all seem to fit in perfectly where they are used. Bravo. Oh, that Fujita is upsetting. You want to feel bad for her but at the same time she needs to know when enough is enough. I wonder, will Sesshoumaru have some sort of punishment for her when he returns, hopefully with Kagome in tow? I think that in this chapter, m favorite part was where Sesshoumaru admitted his fear. That was beautiful. To me, this whole chapter moved fluidly like a song, you have Fujita's scheming, Naraku's waiting, and Sesshoumaru and Kagome's rekindling. Its poetry really, you have me on my toes trying to guess the next moves of all the characters. I'm glad you enjoyed that song. (I'm actually listening to it right now again, you've inspired me to) Yes, it's about Adonis and was from a poem that Schiller wrote. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for us next. I also feel as if somehow, Sesshoumaru has somehow dug himself into a whole once more? ---Paris
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! And OoO! That was unexpected. But at least Fujita isn't carrying Sesshomaru's child, that was my first idea in the earlier chapter, but now it seems stupid. Yay! You updated. You can take as long as you need to write a chapter. If I hadn't known about Naraku, then I would feel a little sad for him, but then again, amaybe I shouldn't since he killed Inuyasha. He did kill Inuyasha right? I think that Sesshomaru was a bit too much possessive with Kagome. Happy President Day!
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mirasaki K storyteller of beauty and soul inspirational {s}we helped with it(k)were not sure about proper technic[y]feh too mushy+m+nah just right*san*lecher&suck up:me:thax for the prez loved the whips for san&yes im showing him the valentine traditions{s}^_0 hehehe:me:love the chappie so glad to have u bad writing poor kag to be treated like that but alas sessho didnt know and fuj aint talking(k)maybe someone should slap her or dump cold water on her to make her snap out of it[y]a bit of roughness never hurts anyone*me&k blush*{s}*snickers*we know a lot about that one:me:shut up just wait til sessho realizes what he did is wrong twice now hes hurt kag one of theses days his dream might come true[y]did u see naraku cry lol like a baby ha knew it ^nar^i did not*sniffs*[y]then whatcha doing now^nar^nothing fool i just stubbed my toe on teiya's cedar chest:me:&what were u doin in my room^nar^left u a present my love{s}i will kill u stay out of my room:me:uh thats my line(k)give it up teiya u know hes going to fight anyone for any reason{s}&this one is because he entreated onto my domain*san*i thought it was her house:me:take them&do something please saki it almost makes me wish for kikyou back@_@*whole group*WHAT???:me:i said almost yeesh dont have a fit by the way when is good ol' sis comin back?she still trying to get naraku?last of all fujita wake up kag saved your life be so kind as to be nice to her love ya lots saki waiting patiently for new chappi |
Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been trying to reveiw your story over and over, but it just seems to stop working. Shall I type it again, you are a talented writer and #1 in my list. :D I hope you'll continue the story. I'll be waiting.
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your last chappie was great even w/all the gory details.never change a thing its your story.now as to this chappie,poor kag having to kill all those men.{s}i told you i wasnt a softy:me:what about the end of the chap{s}damn that woman*growls*:me:thats ok maybe she should know what you got her for xmas, its *sess pounces on me*{s}shut up woman[y]uh brother i wounld it i was you(k)i think we should leave the happy couple alone.she'll catch him eventually.*watches me run after sess w/iron skillet*wow i couldnt believe how cruel sess was having me kill those brave men. but fujita was right i wasnt ready for it.wow did you see sess get all sappy at the end @_@ hey what was that for{s}*yells*shut up you wench:me:dont you call her that*bam*{s}@_@[y]heheheh can i have a go now:me:no he'll be fine just make sure hes nice & sappy lol.we all pitched in & got you this*points to bags*pocky, lots and lots of chocolate.uh miroku sent you pics of him & yash sent some ramen[y]hey thats mine:me:nope its saki's now.i hope you have a very merry xmas & happy new year. im gonna introduce sessho to a few new year traditions my style(k)uh i dont think i wanna know[y]uh teiya why is sessho grinning like that?:me:*blushes*{s}cause she already introduced me to a few of her halloween traditions:me:be quiet besides you liked playing some of those games{s}never said i didnt.*grumbles*i guess i should say you did well on this chapter.*k&y fall over in shock*:me:see he is a softy see u n |
Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 04:31 CST
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NOO!!! i was really getting into it!!! i should have gone to bed hours ago but i wanted to read this so bad, tis very very good. i really like that way you describe things and use the proper names of the swords. lots of people just say sword. kinda cheesy if you ask me. anyways you NEED to update! i comand you! lol or i shall smite you with my smiteing powers! hehehe
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