| "Nothing is as it seems" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Title: Nothing Is As It Seems
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 18:42 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Nothing Is As It Seems
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 00:30 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: maranjade On: February 06, 2005 19:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bloodyhell I love'd it! Is there any way you not write in paragraph form? It hurts my eyes. So, who else is gonna be her mate?
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Title: I'm trying
Reviewed By: trying On: January 16, 2005 04:21 EST
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I am trying to write new chapters but i recently moved and i haven't hooked up my pc yet and i don't have internet at the new house yet but im trying i have everything ready to go but i need the blasted computer to work.
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 23:15 EST
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ur fics doesnt have the best grammar r spelling and u already no this. A hint for u MICROSOFT WORD! it helps! O and ur fic is so far other than that stuff good. But...u need 2 make longer chappies!!!! ^_^
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Title: Nothing is as it seems
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 05:11 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 05:14 EST
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great story! I look forward to reading future chapters!
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Reviewed By: bahboohas [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 04:23 EST
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I want to thank everyone who has reviewed even if you didn't like the story. I'm moving on saturday so when I do update I'll try to make the chapters longer and try to keep the characters in character.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
try starting new paragraph each time a new person speaks.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 23:50 EST
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your story is sooo great i hope you update soon and try readin some of my fics, and your grammer needs a little work, dialouge too, but other than that i love your story!!!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:30 EST
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Please update soon! I want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 23:03 EST
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hey hey you ended it, why did ya end it? well all you have to do now is update it. lol. please as soon as you can update Ja Ne Airy
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Reviewed By: unimportant On: December 02, 2004 05:33 EST
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Hmm. Well, I don't really know what to say. Hmm. Your dialogue needs work -- it sounds forced, fake even. You could improve in your grammar, too. And exactly how does a miko become a demon?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 22:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool!! Kagome's a demon now!!!! Please keep up the great work!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 13:03 EST
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ello! love your story! update soon!!
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