| "Nothing is as it seems" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: BookwormRose296 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 01:54 EDT
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Great chapter. Please update real soon. This is really great start. Awwwww, I was hoping it would be Kurama/Kagome. Bummer, not that there\'s nothing wrong with Hiei. I just wanted him for myself. Oh well.
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Reviewed By: bahboohas [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 00:37 EDT
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Please review even if its bad critizism is good thank you
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 20:29 EDT
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really now...That was AWESOME..I mean it kinda sucks for Kagome and everything...but stillthat was AWESOME!!! wonder what Kagome's wish was...can't wait for the next part:D THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 20:03 EDT
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you're writing isn't horrible at all!! One correction, it's Kagome Higurashi. This is a very nice story, and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make it Hiei/Kagome!! That's the best pairing ever!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: bahboohas [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 17:38 EDT
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thanks for reviewing
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Reviewed By: BookwormRose296 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 17:31 EDT
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Please update real soon. Great chapter. It\'s probably not a good idea to shake someone like that, epsecially who knows about would happen, with that much power.
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Reviewed By: BookwormRose296 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 15:55 EDT
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This is great. Please update real soon.
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Reviewed By: baka_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 11:09 EDT
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Ooh, ooh, pick me! I have a request! Kagome and Hiei! My favorite! If not them, Kag and Kurama! On a second note, your writing could be a little more discriptive. Oh, paragraphs are nice! And quotation marks, etc, etc, etc. All in all, I like your story line so far. Updates make people happy!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 08:12 EDT
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COOL!! hehehe...I like shippo...damn kid is on a 24/7 sugar high or something...YIKES...I mean I get that he wants another fox youkai in his life but man oh man...LOL...can't wait to see where you will take this:D...THANKS
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 07:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story please update soon!!!!
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