| "Nothing is as it seems" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kigarii-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2013 23:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
...So Um...You gon Update soon? -Trying not to sound rude- |
Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 14:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I don't know if I've mentioned this yet but i love your story and wondered if you were just not writing anymore or if somethings happened in your life to stop you from writing or what? Like I said this is a great story idea and despite your sleeping in English your doing great! smiles
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Title: 10 stars/advice
Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. The ideas are orginal and they are intreaging. Thank you for writing this story. Advice... reading books in the age group just before teens will give you access to full fleshed dialog because its geared toward a group of children that almost always are at an age where they're begin persuade to read books longer than 100 pages and without pictures. Other wise just emerge yourself within the characters by seeing their life form their perspective and then their words become your own.
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Title: KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
Reviewed By: hiei_soulmates_kagome_7880 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 03:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really now...That was AWESOME..so any way please... um... update very soon
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Title: Nothing Is As It Seems
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 15:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Hn
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww, c'mon, u didn't update yet? i've been waiting for years! kukukuku, i was being sarcastic, if u peeps didn't noe that. kukukuku
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Title: Nothing is as it seems
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 17:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, can u plz continue writing?! It's so good! continue writing and i'll continue reviewing, kk? ja ne
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Reviewed By: kagome_girl On: August 05, 2005 16:05 EDT
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Wow I loved da story I hope you update soon (gives her pleading eyes)
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Eternal Kenmei J.M. On: July 20, 2005 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story it is very well thought out. Please update soon. ^.^
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Reviewed By: SmittyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this story soon. It is really good and interesting. I would really like to find out how it ends.
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Title: Nothing Is As It Seems
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 18:42 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Nothing Is As It Seems
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 00:30 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: maranjade On: February 06, 2005 19:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bloodyhell I love'd it! Is there any way you not write in paragraph form? It hurts my eyes. So, who else is gonna be her mate?
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Title: I'm trying
Reviewed By: trying On: January 16, 2005 04:21 EST
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I am trying to write new chapters but i recently moved and i haven't hooked up my pc yet and i don't have internet at the new house yet but im trying i have everything ready to go but i need the blasted computer to work.
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 23:15 EST
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ur fics doesnt have the best grammar r spelling and u already no this. A hint for u MICROSOFT WORD! it helps! O and ur fic is so far other than that stuff good. But...u need 2 make longer chappies!!!! ^_^
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