| "Nothing is as it seems" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Title: Nothing is as it seems
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 05:11 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 05:14 EST
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great story! I look forward to reading future chapters!
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Reviewed By: bahboohas [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 04:23 EST
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I want to thank everyone who has reviewed even if you didn't like the story. I'm moving on saturday so when I do update I'll try to make the chapters longer and try to keep the characters in character.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
try starting new paragraph each time a new person speaks.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 23:50 EST
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your story is sooo great i hope you update soon and try readin some of my fics, and your grammer needs a little work, dialouge too, but other than that i love your story!!!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:30 EST
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Please update soon! I want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 23:03 EST
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hey hey you ended it, why did ya end it? well all you have to do now is update it. lol. please as soon as you can update Ja Ne Airy
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Reviewed By: unimportant On: December 02, 2004 05:33 EST
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Hmm. Well, I don't really know what to say. Hmm. Your dialogue needs work -- it sounds forced, fake even. You could improve in your grammar, too. And exactly how does a miko become a demon?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 22:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool!! Kagome's a demon now!!!! Please keep up the great work!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 13:03 EST
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ello! love your story! update soon!!
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Reviewed By: bahboohas [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 22:42 EST
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I don't know how to change an account name maybe make a new account i guess my cousin Katharine sometimes comes on my name to check my stories and KAgome is an elemental whick means she can control all the forces of natural as well as fire and the shadows.
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Reviewed By: bahboohas [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 22:40 EST
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Thanks everyone for reviewing it means alot to me
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Reviewed By: killerkitty1106 On: November 25, 2004 10:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have a question do you know how to change your account name on here because i want to change it.this is really good but what type of youkai is she?
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Reviewed By: blackstarnite [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 00:37 EST
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I liked this chapter but it was kinda short and seemed thrown together.
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story i would love to keep reading your storie it seems good so far but updater real soon would you?
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