| "Higher Learning" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 21, 2005 19:08 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 05, 2005 19:41 CDT
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i loved this story. it was great. please ad more to this story.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared (not signed in) On: June 28, 2005 17:57 CDT
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I really like this story and appreciate your maintianing it.
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: June 24, 2005 14:16 CDT
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I enjoy reading a HP and YYH crossover that did not involve the YYH characters being wizards or anything like that. I read The Best Defense for that sort of reading. I like how you took this unique and original twist on the crossover. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: HieiWannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked you putting the imps in this story, and it's really cute for that one to be Hiei's, for lack of a better term, friend.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 23, 2005 12:36 CDT
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poor Kurama, although I do wonder what Malfoy wants with the map, and what happened to Hermonie.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: April 06, 2005 18:32 CDT
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most interesting, the developpements.. T_T I wish I could see more of the Makai arc... T_T but everything's so...sparse here... it's hard to get good anime
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared (not signed in) On: April 06, 2005 18:14 CDT
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I get what you were saying about purposefully not including architectural descriptions, but I don't agree with it. If you are going to write a fic involving a series you have to own the series and that includes the physical setting. And to answer your question about Koenma's office, I have personally described his office, a large portion of the Reikai palace, and the River Styx in my story A Well Too Deep. /// I still love the way you are writing Hiei and Kurama and really all of the characters in general. I would like to see more of Ron rather than Harry so if it's a toss up between those two my vote goes to Ron simply because I already get a lot of Harry. /// Maybe it's just me, but, while I love this atmosphere and potential of this story, I find myself getting bored. Maybe these last two chapters are the exception, however it still stands that the solid dialogue with little or no action/description/thought breaks causes my mind to lose interest and wander whether or not I want to pay attention. Please keep that in mind because I know that I can't be the only reader with such a minimal attention span and I really am trying to help. /// On the upside, "Welcome Back." I was quite worried that you were abandoning this story like so many others and never returning (which would be utter tragedy). :( /// Until next time, Fuzzy Eared.
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Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 14:45 CST
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--Hiei knew he'd messed up by hesitating so long, and he made up for it now. He didn't really blame himself, considering the absolute stupidity he'd found on the yard. It had been enough to leave him staring in stark disbelief. Child wizards attacking each other while a potentially deadly demon prepared one of their own professors to be its next meal. It was mindboggling. He'd never understand humans. Never.-- This has absolutely got to be the funniest paragraph in history. It was so good it had me on the ground in stitches. Good work.
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Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 14:22 CST
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I loved your reference to Naruto, it made me laugh.
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Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 14:15 CST
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This is really good. I love how you wrote that there were three worlds, I never really thought about it like that. I also love the student's curiosity about the new students. Also, loved how Hiei burnt the entire wall of portraits. Poor Hiei and he was just trying to be nice, ha, ha, ha.
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 05:53 CST
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i love HP and YYH you've blended these two series together perfectly
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 21:33 CST
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*falls over dead* I don't think I blinked once during that chapter... I was sucked in, and must say, I have a sudden, intense urge to give a shiner to Harry. Yet I can see why he's like that, so I'll desist... for the moment. Hiei and Kurama spying... curiosity gets you so many places... will someone notice the burn later? Or will it heal? So the death-eaters escaped Azkaban, Harry did wandless magic to get his wand... which he still seems to haven't reacqiured. Ah well, though I must say, whatever happened to Snape musta been very painful... *shudders and touches arm* I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 21:11 CST
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I can't remember what it was exactly, but something you mentioned in one of your A/Ns led me to believe you spoke japanese. Your dialogue was very good, if on the extensive side. It's obvious that you put time and thought into it. I have no problem with how much dialogue you included but I would suggest that you try and balance that out with action. That is the only criticism I have for this fic. This could be just my personal preference and opinion, but hear me out anyway. (At least in this chapter) While the characters are believable and the events are well maneuvered (and everything is sprinkled with an angst that for some reason makes me picture really dark maroon hallways with dim lighting, lol) not enough actual action is being *written* about, though it is implied. It is difficult to really get into the story when I'm wading through half scenes. Anyway, thanks for getting around to updating and congrats on such a long chapter. :) Until next time, Fuzzy Eared
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Welcome back! ^_~ Glad to see an update on this one. Loved the chapter ... and Lupin and Dumbledore are doing good at keeping just the right information away from Harry. Poor thing ... worrying about hurting his friend and being scared of what he saw. Now if I could just get you to update Indebted ... I'd be a really happy reader ^_~ I know ... you'll get to it when you get to it ... but I gotta try once and a while ^_~
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