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Reviewed By: emeraldisles [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! I can't wait for the next section. I'm not a vampire expert, so I am very happy you explain everything. Keep up the good work! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Vamp King On: April 14, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I beg to differ. There are three kinds of vampires. The ones you mentioned, transformed, and then there is a revenge vampire. These are created when there is so much hatred in their heart that they won't die untill they kill the object of their hatred. Good story though. By the way, i study vampires. Weird huh? Reveiw me please, i am Lord_InuYasha24
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Reviewed By: Motje (not logged in) On: January 13, 2005 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one! I really love you style, you got me swepped away and sucked into the story time and time again. The poor hikari's, I really hope you get the bastard to die a painfull death. (A bit of Bakura's bloodlust, Marik's insanity and the early manga's madness called Yami. The horror that trio could make.. *grins evilly*) Hope you update soon :) Ps. if you still want someone to draw you a picture of the three hikari's just mail me, I can't promise to do it in a day (midexam week again), but I'll get to it as soon as I can then.
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 10:40 CST
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*weeps and wails* Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Hakujou took Yugi's innocence! The raping bastard! How dare he! I want to kill him! Kill him horribly! Bakura: Hey! Don't you give a damn about me? RT: *sniffles* At least you and Marik got the pleasure of taking your Hikaris' innocence. And Yami's got a plan to bring you back. And you were able to fight off Hakujou. *locks Bakura in the closet so he can't intrude on the review again.* Anywhoo...um...it was a good chapter, despite the fact that...*bursts into tears again* How could you do that to poor little Yugi? (Not that I haven't done some pretty bad things to him in my own fics, but...) *wipes at eyes with tissues.* I think I'm done now. Just...have Hakujou meet a horrible, bloody, painful end for what he did! Post the next chappie soon, I can't wait to find out what Yami's plan is!
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Reviewed By: Hillary On: January 10, 2005 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, this is one of my favorite fanfics. I like how you made the yami's vampires. :) Hope you update soon! -pokes-
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 19:19 CST
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I just finished ch. 7. It was great. I can`t wait to see what is going to happen. Ryou hurting makes me feel bad. He`s such a cute and innocent bishie. Not that I couldn`t see him otherwise. (picturing Ryou in black leather over Bakura tied to a bed) crap I drooled on the computer. Oh well. This is soooo interesting. Most of the vampire stories are short and to the point. I prefer the longer ones. You wrote that you would post this where ever it was aloud. Check out my bio, I have a site that would love to have your works.
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Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 16:58 CST
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Wow, awesome fic, it's a nice look on Yamis and Hikaris. I especially like Yami and Yugi; hope we can see more of them later. Glad we're taking steps now to try and get Bakura back, and I can't wait to see how they (or whoever does) end up finishing Hakojou in the end. Good job, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very nice style of writing. I just wanted to let you know I love this fanfiction. I encourage you to continue and update.
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Title: *gasp*
Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 07:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sooo love it! One thing i didn't get though is how did Hakojou (?) rape Ryou everynight after that??? I am confused...maybe I didn't read it right. @___@ Anyways please update soon! Ja ne!
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Title: MM is weird sometimes
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh how horrible.. Hakujou is an evil being indeed. Poor Ryou.. poor Bakura! I love Bakura, and yet he went an disappeared. Oh wow, I'm so out of it. It's like 2 AM and I was at a party @_@ Better review later, xD
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 10:11 CST
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Wow. Usualy I don't read anything but YamixYugi (they're my fav YGO yaoi couple), but I found myself practically drooling over the BakuraxRyou and MarikxMalik lemons. Of course, I'm still waiting for Yami and Yugi to have their turn. I love this fic! Although I'm stocking up on tissues, I have a feeling I'm going to be needing them...like when Hakujou starts tormenting the hikaris...
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 16:44 CST
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*wipes away drool* Ok, I take back what I said at FF.Net about Marik and his seme-ness. That lemon was [b]SOO[/b] yummy hot and just how I imagine Malik and Marik doing it. I think I'll put this story on my fave stories list since it's so cool. Oh, and was Marik speaking in Egyptian or Persian?
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Reviewed By: Katsumai (Fireangel3571) On: December 04, 2004 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this story is fantastic. I have deffineentally rated it one of my favorite stories ever. I love it! Please, update soon, I love opening my e-mail to see you have updated your chapters!
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Reviewed By: JJ On: December 04, 2004 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dam man! a Malik/Marik pairing. they r alwayz my fav pair! and a seto/jou! cant wait 2 read them. (U hav got 2 do more marik/malik pairings. they r so sexy and hott!) nice work
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Title: awesom
Reviewed By: cas On: December 04, 2004 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a totaly awesome fic. itz so sexy! nice work. keep it up! ') uve got 2 write more! MORE MORE MORE plzzzzzz!
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