| "Dark Soulmate" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: JadeCade On: November 07, 2004 22:06 CST
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*chokes* Wow! That was the most sour lemon I've ever read... I loved it!!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: November 07, 2004 11:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*rolls eyes* RA! Someone needs to teach Bakura some patience! Where's the Marik/Malik lemon? And no rape! Cuz I strongly suspect if Marik rapes Malik, he'll end up an enunch...
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Reviewed By: BlueMonkeyCrossing Offline On: November 06, 2004 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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That was good! I think you did pretty good detail, so I give you an 'I hate Anzu Plushie' and a 'Tombraider Bakura Plushie.' *Throws it to you* Update sooon!!!
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Title: yeeeah .. =D
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. awesome story, kick ass lemon. I love vampire stories and I especially love your plot, or what you've given us so far. It's mean of you to hold the chapters hostage and demand reviews as ransom, lol =D It's all good, well done for a first lemon. It was quite enjoyable ^______^ I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. So, please update soon. Until then, this is definitely going to be a favorite =D Ja!
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Reviewed By: ladywolf(Terri) On: November 04, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course I would come read it!..(yeah..I came over from FFnet) Great story!! Please keep it going!!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 17:07 CST
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*wipes away drool* Lemon GOOD... and so's the rest of the story, it's a great idea. What language was Bakura speaking, Egyptian or something else? And I do hope that the Yugi/Yami and Malik/Marik thing come soon, those are some of my favorite pairings. Seto/Jou wouldn't be a bad pairing, I enjoy reading that only if it's well done.
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Reviewed By: pellusid On: November 03, 2004 15:22 CST
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that was so wrong and i feel dirty reading it... i am so going to hell. so could i get another one to read on my way there? i do love my lemons... yummmy :~)
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 10:00 CST
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Just read ch. 2. I love the lemon. What is going to happen? Will they ever be together again? Keep going. You are on my favorites list so I`ll know when you update. So keep going.
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Reviewed By: SW On: October 28, 2004 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE FOr the LOVE OF GOD UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Karasu8 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! ^_________^ PLEASE update soon. I'll get my friends to read this fic too. =) Much Love, Karasu8
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 18:03 CDT
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This is good. I would love to know who he see. Malik and Marik would be good together if they were a little hostile with each other. Yami and Yugi would be the fluffy ones. Thanks for writing the this chapter, hope to see the next soon.
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Reviewed By: pellusid On: October 27, 2004 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you suck.... don't quit your day job! j/k all your stories kick ass. you are my fave. author next to me....hehehe. write more damn it! please :) i want another ch. now!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 08:17 CDT
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Wow! That was amazing. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: g00dies26 On: October 22, 2004 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely written. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoah, that was beautiful, though I expected the chappie to be a bit longer. Please update soon
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