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Title: mree
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo! Marik/Malik lemon! A bit short though.. =( Deme wanted more. Anyway glad you didn't make that Yugi/Yami bit very long, heh. Ohh yay!! A Seto/Jou lemon! WHOO! They're my favorite pairing at the moment. Better make it good.. =P Thanks again, and update soon...
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Reviewed By: MaggieMay On: December 02, 2004 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love where this is going. In general I don't care for vampire stories and tend not to read them, but I LOVE THIS ONE. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: November 29, 2004 08:44 CST
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I love this, it is getting so interesting. I like the idea of Marik serving Malik, in every way. Are you going to get to the lemons soon?
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Reviewed By: Angel of Roses [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... so THAT'S what I wrote. *moment of silence* *bursts into fits of hysterical laughter* You know, if any other person would have read that, they would think I'm mentally retarded! / Bakura & Marik: You ARE a retard! *point* / Angela: Don't point at me. >> It makes me uneasy. XP Anyway, I just got thinking about that song Marik and Maki were dancing to and I am going to go hunt for it and download it. Oh. And I might be confusing you with someone else, but I think you send me an e-mail. Hm... I'll go check right now. ^^ I guess I will review here and on FF.net as well. No such thing as too many reviews now is there? Well... I was supposed to go to bed but I guess I'll stay up for a bit longer to check on the e-mail thing. ^-^ ja-ne! *virtually gives candy* ~*~Angela~*~
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Title: wakka
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! A Marik/Malik chapter! =D One of the best pairings. Damn sexy ass Egyptians. Anyway, I was hoping for a little foreplay in this chappie (and my inner yaoi-lust called for a yoai) but that wasn't gonna happen. I'm still happy they found each other. *kicks authoress* Don't you try and hold the chapters back! =P I'd love to draw you a picture of the Hikaris but, my school and homework is TOO time-consuming. Plus, my lazy arse can't do requests anyway XD Sorry, hope someone draws it for you though! Please update soon! And no hard feelings on the kick, ja!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 19:36 CST
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Persian? Wow, it's interesting that u used that language, since almost every writer either uses English, Japanese or Egyptian. Well, once I did read a lemon where Ryou said "I love you" to Bakura in Swedish. Anyway, good chapter. Haha, love how Yugi and Yami met, very cool. And Malik's a vampire hunter? Hm, that'll make it even more interesting when he meets Marik... ^_^
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Reviewed By: pellusid On: November 24, 2004 14:45 CST
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i am having lemon withdrawls *eats a lemon*!!! Well, it is still good despite the absence of lemons. I think it is sweet how protective yami is of yugi.
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Title: aka Dark Magician Girl / Hikaru on ff.net
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: November 23, 2004 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wished I found this sooner, this such an intriguing story. I love it so far. And I hate the villain even though he haven't been introduced yet. I loved the lemon too, so lemony delicious. ^_^ lol. Can't wait till the next ch. Ud soon. See ya.
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Reviewed By: Sera On: November 23, 2004 23:23 CST
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Oooooh! I'm reviewing, so do continue!
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Title: Getting interesting
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting interesting. Please continue.
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Title: =O
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 21:07 CST
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Ey! Evil Yami/Yugi nonsense. Phooey! Anyway, I can't wait to see how Marik and Malik are going to meet up. Those two are so insane, it's awesome. Heh, this Hakujou guy does sound like an asshole, but he also does seem hot XD Evil ass motherfuckers tend to be sexy -vulgar sentence- Update soon, and I hope you find your notes so you can keep this awesome story going. 'Cause just as the vamps has a bloodlust, I have a yaoi-lust, or fic-lust, whatever. Just update! Thanks in advance =D
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Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: November 23, 2004 19:45 CST
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This is getting interesting. I love the vampire theme. I love vampires. Maybe I should do one. I don`t know if any of my ideas would work with a vampire theme. I guess it`s worth a try though. Maybe someone will request one. Oh well. I go with what hits me at the time. I guess it`s good. Everyone thinks I actually think out my stories. I do hope that I see another chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Angel of Roses (not logged in) On: November 23, 2004 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn! That was a GREAT lemon!! It has to be one of the best I have read! Such descriptions and-... Were... Were's Bakura!!? I thought he was going to help me review! / Malik: er... ya see, in the middle of the lemon, he grabbed Ryou and dragged him to the nearest room. *snikers* / Angela: O_O Ok... *cough* Anyway, This was GREAT! It was so descriptive! ^^ I am glad I came and read it! And I would've liked for Bakura to be here and say how much he loved it, but I think he and Ryou are sort of 'busy' in that room right now... / Marik: YOUR room you mean? *snickers* / Angela: 0_0!? BAKURAAA!! *runs to her bedroom door and starts hitting it violently* / Malik & Marik: *pissing themselves laughing* / Angela: It's not funny!! *to authoress* Please update soon! *continues to struggles with door*
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Reviewed By: Sionnac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 12:09 CST
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Great story so far. Write more! Quickly!
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Reviewed By: timeandtide On: November 14, 2004 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going please!You have to update. Cool lemon. I really looking forward for the Marik/Malik and the Yami/Yugi lemons. Cool plot. I always enjoyed vampires fics.
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