| "Dark Soulmate" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Motje (not logged in) On: January 13, 2005 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one! I really love you style, you got me swepped away and sucked into the story time and time again. The poor hikari's, I really hope you get the bastard to die a painfull death. (A bit of Bakura's bloodlust, Marik's insanity and the early manga's madness called Yami. The horror that trio could make.. *grins evilly*) Hope you update soon :) Ps. if you still want someone to draw you a picture of the three hikari's just mail me, I can't promise to do it in a day (midexam week again), but I'll get to it as soon as I can then.
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 10:40 CST
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*weeps and wails* Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Hakujou took Yugi's innocence! The raping bastard! How dare he! I want to kill him! Kill him horribly! Bakura: Hey! Don't you give a damn about me? RT: *sniffles* At least you and Marik got the pleasure of taking your Hikaris' innocence. And Yami's got a plan to bring you back. And you were able to fight off Hakujou. *locks Bakura in the closet so he can't intrude on the review again.* Anywhoo...um...it was a good chapter, despite the fact that...*bursts into tears again* How could you do that to poor little Yugi? (Not that I haven't done some pretty bad things to him in my own fics, but...) *wipes at eyes with tissues.* I think I'm done now. Just...have Hakujou meet a horrible, bloody, painful end for what he did! Post the next chappie soon, I can't wait to find out what Yami's plan is!
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Reviewed By: Hillary On: January 10, 2005 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, this is one of my favorite fanfics. I like how you made the yami's vampires. :) Hope you update soon! -pokes-
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 19:19 CST
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I just finished ch. 7. It was great. I can`t wait to see what is going to happen. Ryou hurting makes me feel bad. He`s such a cute and innocent bishie. Not that I couldn`t see him otherwise. (picturing Ryou in black leather over Bakura tied to a bed) crap I drooled on the computer. Oh well. This is soooo interesting. Most of the vampire stories are short and to the point. I prefer the longer ones. You wrote that you would post this where ever it was aloud. Check out my bio, I have a site that would love to have your works.
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Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 16:58 CST
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Wow, awesome fic, it's a nice look on Yamis and Hikaris. I especially like Yami and Yugi; hope we can see more of them later. Glad we're taking steps now to try and get Bakura back, and I can't wait to see how they (or whoever does) end up finishing Hakojou in the end. Good job, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very nice style of writing. I just wanted to let you know I love this fanfiction. I encourage you to continue and update.
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Title: *gasp*
Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 07:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sooo love it! One thing i didn't get though is how did Hakojou (?) rape Ryou everynight after that??? I am confused...maybe I didn't read it right. @___@ Anyways please update soon! Ja ne!
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Title: MM is weird sometimes
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh how horrible.. Hakujou is an evil being indeed. Poor Ryou.. poor Bakura! I love Bakura, and yet he went an disappeared. Oh wow, I'm so out of it. It's like 2 AM and I was at a party @_@ Better review later, xD
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 10:11 CST
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Wow. Usualy I don't read anything but YamixYugi (they're my fav YGO yaoi couple), but I found myself practically drooling over the BakuraxRyou and MarikxMalik lemons. Of course, I'm still waiting for Yami and Yugi to have their turn. I love this fic! Although I'm stocking up on tissues, I have a feeling I'm going to be needing them...like when Hakujou starts tormenting the hikaris...
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 16:44 CST
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*wipes away drool* Ok, I take back what I said at FF.Net about Marik and his seme-ness. That lemon was [b]SOO[/b] yummy hot and just how I imagine Malik and Marik doing it. I think I'll put this story on my fave stories list since it's so cool. Oh, and was Marik speaking in Egyptian or Persian?
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Reviewed By: Katsumai (Fireangel3571) On: December 04, 2004 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this story is fantastic. I have deffineentally rated it one of my favorite stories ever. I love it! Please, update soon, I love opening my e-mail to see you have updated your chapters!
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Reviewed By: JJ On: December 04, 2004 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dam man! a Malik/Marik pairing. they r alwayz my fav pair! and a seto/jou! cant wait 2 read them. (U hav got 2 do more marik/malik pairings. they r so sexy and hott!) nice work
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Title: awesom
Reviewed By: cas On: December 04, 2004 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a totaly awesome fic. itz so sexy! nice work. keep it up! ') uve got 2 write more! MORE MORE MORE plzzzzzz!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: December 04, 2004 09:28 CST
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I loved the lemon, that was really hot. Those two are always so hot. Never too gentle and never to rough. Thank you very much. Can`t wait for the Seto/Jou one.
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Reviewed By: Angel of Roses (not logged in) On: December 03, 2004 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Angela: Well, Here I am, reviewing on Mediaminer as I promised! ^_^ / Bakura: You need a life really bad./ Angela: Yeah... I wonder were I can download one.../ Everyone: *anime fall*/ Angela: ^^;; Sorry. Anyway, on FF.net, I forgot to say that I loved that one part when Malik screamed "I want you to fuck me! Fuck me until I can no longer tell if I'm screaming out in pain or in pleasure!" / Marik: That was so SEXI!!/ Bakura: *looks at Ryou* Why don't you scream like that? / Ryou: -_-; / Angela: ^^; I thought it was pretty exotic too. But I have to make this short because I have to go to bed! I'm practically a walking corpse now! / Bakura: You may not be one, but you sure as hell look like one. >> / Angela: *starts crying again*/ Ryou: Bakura! / Bakura: It's the truth! / Angela: *sniff* I'll go to bed now. T-T Byes!
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