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Title: ... where to start
Reviewed By: Anaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
... I give up....
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Reviewed By: Anaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Author notes should go either at the begining or end of a chapter; putting them dead-smack in the middle, specially to talk about something as stupid as a pair of pants, is retarded and leaves me to wonder if you have issues I ought to be concerned about.
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Reviewed By: Anaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
... I've definitely read better fanfics....
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPPPPPPPDDDDDAAAAAATTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE! I'm still enjoying this fic and I check back everyday to see if there's an update so please update!
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Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are some things grammar and spelling wise you could work on, but I love this fic so far! (I just read all the chapters in two hours!) I love the idea of having Vera and Hiei together, very cute and awesome. So keep on writing cuz this is one of my new fav fan fics!
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Reviewed By: Animefreak_11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 01:02 CDT
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holy crap! 19 chapters!?!?!?!? o.o i have some catching up to do.... my other account was banned so i'm back... (Animefreak11) ... so yeah... >.> just thought i'd let you know.
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Title: Blah
Reviewed By: Limia Asakura On: July 08, 2005 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya Shaman King is the gREATEST Shaow ever
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 04, 2005 12:30 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story.
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Title: Dark Source
Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: July 02, 2005 09:03 CDT
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Wow great chapter. Very interesting. Oh yea and thanks for the recap at the end of the chapter because it helped with the remembering hehehehe. Well keep up the good work and update soon!!! -InTheShadows.
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Reviewed By: dragonwolfangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great but you need more romance update soon.
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Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: April 08, 2005 23:52 CDT
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Great Chapter! It was kinda short I was a little dissapointed but anyways I see you need OOCs so I will give you one. Name: Mikiko Demon: Black Cat Eyes: Lavender Hair: Dark Brown Techniques: Martial Arts uses sword when in a bad mood. Can transform into black cat form that has black cat tail with cat ears(black) and just plain black hair (NO HIGHLIGHTS) and blue eyes. That is about it. Well ttyl!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen - i cant log in On: April 05, 2005 10:35 CDT
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this is very good, u still have the conest going?? if u do can u email me or something plz.... im trying to type my stories but i get hooked in other peoples stories, then i have to leave a review. this is very very very good... plz update soon if u can
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 21:32 CDT
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lol yeah my spring break was busy also! i went to florida!!! woot for disneyworld! though the weather is kinda too hot and sticky for comfort... >> but it was fun fun... ^^ update sooooooooooon!!!!
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Title: i never wanna sign in do i?
Reviewed By: Jet_black too lazzy to sign in x.x On: April 04, 2005 12:35 CDT
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MY OOC IS TOO LONG TO PUT ON THIS THING I'M GONNA EMAIL IT TO YA!!!!!!! UPDATEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:50 CDT
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What's Mukuro planning on doing with Hiei? So Vera was a hostage so Mukuro could get to Hiei and she wants to 'talk' with him now. I hope Hiei kills her for holding Vera at knife point. Good chapter! ~Ja
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