| "Dark Source" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cursed Shadow On: December 04, 2004 18:07 CST
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Baka onna...update soon...
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Reviewed By: Cloaked in Darkness On: December 04, 2004 18:06 CST
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..........(sheths katana}....update soon
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Reviewed By: Life of Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 17:46 CST
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yay! update really soon. hiei has a freaky sister.... yukina is his younger sister too, ya know. anyway, i like. cant wait for next update. ~Darkfire~
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Reviewed By: Cloaked in Darkness On: November 28, 2004 15:26 CST
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Update soon........*girl is tied up in the backround screaming for help.*
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Reviewed By: Cursed Shadow On: November 28, 2004 15:24 CST
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Update soon.
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Reviewed By: aru-inu On: November 28, 2004 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have an odd mind... sweet! great job with the story! please update really soon!
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Reviewed By: animefreak11 *not logged in* On: November 27, 2004 23:26 CST
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! THANKIES!!!!!!!!!! *hugs* i got a new watch and mini stereo... and... i saw a movie!!!!!! ^_^ -_- crap i have to do ALL my hw tomorow... >> awwww man!!!! i hate school... oh well.......^_____________^ thanks!!!! and UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Life of Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just my opinion, but i think it would be easier to read if you give each characters speaking their own line. but this was an intriging (sp?) start. yes, sorta depressing, but hey. i will continue to read. ~Darkfire~
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Reviewed By: jenniferhlub On: November 23, 2004 18:01 CST
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This is a great story you wrote. I hope you update soon. I really hope Vera ends up With Hiei or else I am not going to read this story and review anymore.*thinks sadly for saying that*I am sorry for saying it is just I hate it how Hiei is never being paired with anyone in the story and Kurama is always getting paired.
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 21:26 CST
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lollypop????? lol me no have it *glaces at lollypop on desk*grabs* well now i don't....^^U anyway!!!! weird chapter...lol and no unfortunetely u can't get rid of school easily...maybe during summer vacation... >> the only escape!!! ^^ freedom!!!! -_-U err... anyway yeah....update!!!
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Reviewed By: animefreak11 *not logged in* On: November 20, 2004 12:28 CST
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loool! me not saying u said i was old.....me gonna be 16 in 7 days!!! *nov 27* yaaay! and no my bro is in college.....>> so i don't think it'll help... ^^U anyway!! when are u online?? i never saw u connected once!!! T__T lol maybe u were grounded... or sumthing like that... ANYWAY!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: oo ooo!! On: November 20, 2004 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo oO please continue. da da da da daaa im lovin it! that's all i gotta say
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Reviewed By: Cloaked in Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 18:47 CST
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...updates soon...*a girl is in the backround gagged and tied to a chair*...dont mind her she is just a baka onna ningen....*starts to sharpen sythe and katanas*
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Reviewed By: animefreak11 *not logged in* On: November 14, 2004 20:44 CST
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yeah i post on e-fiction.org and fosff which you already know off... ^^U yeah me old i know... >> but oh well... and that chapter was hilarious!1 a flood!!! why would there be a flood?? *shrugs* how would i know ur the one writing!!!!! ^^U erm anyway UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cloaked in Darkness On: November 14, 2004 11:55 CST
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I dont think you want to know-*smirks, and sharpens sythe.-*Now its perfct.I can finally kill the hyperative sugar high baka.No its not you Im talking about...or it could be you.Update soon and pleasent dreams.
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