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Title: ... where to start
Reviewed By: Anaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
... I give up....
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Reviewed By: Anaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Author notes should go either at the begining or end of a chapter; putting them dead-smack in the middle, specially to talk about something as stupid as a pair of pants, is retarded and leaves me to wonder if you have issues I ought to be concerned about.
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Reviewed By: Anaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
... I've definitely read better fanfics....
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 22:15 CDT
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UPPPPPPPDDDDDAAAAAATTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE! I'm still enjoying this fic and I check back everyday to see if there's an update so please update!
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Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are some things grammar and spelling wise you could work on, but I love this fic so far! (I just read all the chapters in two hours!) I love the idea of having Vera and Hiei together, very cute and awesome. So keep on writing cuz this is one of my new fav fan fics!
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Reviewed By: Animefreak_11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 01:02 CDT
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holy crap! 19 chapters!?!?!?!? o.o i have some catching up to do.... my other account was banned so i'm back... (Animefreak11) ... so yeah... >.> just thought i'd let you know.
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Title: Blah
Reviewed By: Limia Asakura On: July 08, 2005 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya Shaman King is the gREATEST Shaow ever
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 04, 2005 12:30 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story.
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Title: Dark Source
Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: July 02, 2005 09:03 CDT
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Wow great chapter. Very interesting. Oh yea and thanks for the recap at the end of the chapter because it helped with the remembering hehehehe. Well keep up the good work and update soon!!! -InTheShadows.
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Reviewed By: dragonwolfangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great but you need more romance update soon.
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Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: April 08, 2005 23:52 CDT
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Great Chapter! It was kinda short I was a little dissapointed but anyways I see you need OOCs so I will give you one. Name: Mikiko Demon: Black Cat Eyes: Lavender Hair: Dark Brown Techniques: Martial Arts uses sword when in a bad mood. Can transform into black cat form that has black cat tail with cat ears(black) and just plain black hair (NO HIGHLIGHTS) and blue eyes. That is about it. Well ttyl!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen - i cant log in On: April 05, 2005 10:35 CDT
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this is very good, u still have the conest going?? if u do can u email me or something plz.... im trying to type my stories but i get hooked in other peoples stories, then i have to leave a review. this is very very very good... plz update soon if u can
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 21:32 CDT
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lol yeah my spring break was busy also! i went to florida!!! woot for disneyworld! though the weather is kinda too hot and sticky for comfort... >> but it was fun fun... ^^ update sooooooooooon!!!!
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Title: i never wanna sign in do i?
Reviewed By: Jet_black too lazzy to sign in x.x On: April 04, 2005 12:35 CDT
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MY OOC IS TOO LONG TO PUT ON THIS THING I'M GONNA EMAIL IT TO YA!!!!!!! UPDATEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:50 CDT
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What's Mukuro planning on doing with Hiei? So Vera was a hostage so Mukuro could get to Hiei and she wants to 'talk' with him now. I hope Hiei kills her for holding Vera at knife point. Good chapter! ~Ja
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Reviewed By: Mistress of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! Its really great. Please update soon. Oh, and one thing I noticed, you might want to pay better atention to what tense of word you use. You switch back and forth from past to present and vice versa some, but no worries. It's a common mistake. ^^
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Reviewed By: ange34 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 12:31 CST
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you..you .. liked my review!?!?!?!?!? wow kewl thx! and the chapie that you just wrote is now confusing. but thats OK cuz im just gona go back and read the chapie before it and UPDATE SOON!!!! ohh one more thing.. our school princible had to eat green eggs and ham on Dr. susses B-day!!! it was funny!!!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 17:23 CST
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UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: darksilver On: March 25, 2005 16:52 CST
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Name - Shadow speagal Nickname - Silver Hair - black with silver tips birthday - May 17 Height - 5'1 Afraid - betrayal Eyes - silver Personality - acts cold and distant also a tomboy to strangers or people who mess with her friends most of the time she likes to be alone and likes messing with the teachers but once you know her shes loyal and is nice to her friends also might smile time to time demon - 1/2 cat and 1/2 phonix Weapons - controls fire, has swords, is fast, strong,and has better senses then other demons Specialties - she has wings that let her fly Sex - female Clothings - wears black fingerless gloves a black shirt,with a hoodie,black baggy pants,and black skatershoes claws - yes wings - black Ears - pointed nails - sharp Teeth - sharp Past - mom died after giving birth to her, her father died a few months later by deamons so she was in a traveled were she was hunted for her feathers after awile she found a opening to the human world were she stayed
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Reviewed By: Jet_black too lazzy to sign in x.x On: March 19, 2005 20:01 CST
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YAY!!! You upadted!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_______^ o.o;; please really works? wow... well anywho I've been reading soooo much lately that when i started reading this update (chapter 15) i was soooo confused so i reread chaters 13 and 14 XD i'm such an idiot. well THANKS FOR THE GREAT UPDATE AND UPDATE AGAIN ASAP!!!!
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Title: kewll
Reviewed By: ange34(not logged in) On: March 19, 2005 18:47 CST
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kewl chape! and who is this kios or ksio or WHATEVER! dud ur story is da BOMB!!!!!!! this is my first time reading it and your character Vada or whatever her name is is weird but kool! i mean she said " I like Green eggs and ham, that I do" that was just too funny!! I had to take a brake from reading cuz i was laughing soo hard! she is too funny! And peoples i must tell you the Ring is not, I repeat NOT SCARY!!! when i first saw it I was Waiting for it to get scary but then it ended! IT ENDED!!! it was a dumb dumb movie!!!!! so there fore i will not even bother to see the Ring 2. And if you really want to see a scaary movie watch Wrong Turn !!! wait a miniute! how the heck did i end up talken about movies???!?!?!? (the review before you you dumb@$$!).....ohhhh....he..hehe....srry...ohh and one more thing before i go! ^-^' Muuhahahahahahahahahahahaha*cough**cough*..haha..ha... -_-' ..wow i wrote alot!.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 14:20 CST
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So they're trying to save Vera, but what's Mukuro planning to do with the poor girl? Did they just kidnap her for the hell of it or is Mukuro really trying to get to Hiei? Hmm...*ponders* Gomen, if I sound stupid but I just saw the Ring 2 and didn't get a wink of sleep last night. *shivers* Creepy ass Samara and that little boy...I'm afraid of TVs again...anyway, I'm a little upset that I can't find YYH on CN anymore, they replaced it with Zatchbell or something which is a Shaman King ripoff. Shimatte, I'm rambling about stupid things again. So...update before I go completely insane and chop somebody's head off. ~Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 12:45 CST
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Who's Kiori? And why are they trying to go into a mansion? I don't know, maybe its just me and I'm stupid. But you should really stop updating so far apart. I don't even know whats going on anymore. Next time you should just write a whole bunch of chapters and then just gradually update with them, you know like twice a week or so. Cause I used to really like this story I even added it to my favorites but now I don't even remember what its about. 'Dark Source? I don't know anything about that, I've never heard of it before.' Now you don't want you readers to be thinking like that do you? Please consider this.
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 12:16 CST
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yaaaay cool chapter!!!1 lol i think i'm forgetting things about this story... X__X no good... and i didn't get to review the last chapter... >> ahem... but i was-- busy..... yeah that's right! :P now UPDATE!!!!! ^^
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Title: Dark Source
Reviewed By: InTheShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 10:30 CST
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At first when I was reading the chapter I thought you thought that Mukuro's name was Mukuru. *That sounded weird* Anyways, I liked. Yes, some ppl do think that Mukuro does have a thing for Hiei. I even think that. Well update soon the story is going good so far. Well you just turned 13 last month. HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY!! I remember when I turned 13 that birthday rocked I got mangas!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: March 17, 2005 14:16 CST
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Great story so far! Update soon! I am curious to see what happens next!! -InTheShadows.
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Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 00:41 CST
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UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please? does saying please work now adays? idk i never say it o.o;; whatever UPDATE ANYWAY YOU'RE GOING ON MY FAVS LIST!!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 20:39 CST
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Mukuro actuall has robotic body parts.. [she once poured acid on her body.] So what you think is covering her eye actually is her eye. UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 17:43 CST
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I forgive you for the wait...*gets hit over the head with a mallet* X.x *magically recovers* Ahem, anywhoz, it was well worth the wait and I'm not gonna be picky about your grammer or anything because this is a really good story. I liked how you didn't rush the whole Hiei/Oc romance because I've seen stories where in the first five chapters the OC already befriends him and stuff. It's annoying but Vera's a good OC placed miles above other OCs that I've had the imense displeasure of reading about. Well done! ~Ja ne
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 09:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Take your time it's your story. Just relax. ^_^ Don't spend too much time on updating you also have your life if you are going to spend all your life span trying to write a story than man does that suck. I just hope you appreciate what you are doing in life or it's worth notin' to anyone. Oh yeah I liked the story very much.
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