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Reviewed By: hiei jagan jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 12:49 CST
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Hey it's alright we can wait. If someone can't wait you should just make them wait. You deserve some time off you know. You can't always listen to what other people tell you ya know, lad.You spent your time updating and all they do is read and review, but sorry for that. If I offended you than I'm sorry. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 12:57 CST
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YOU'RE ALIVEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! *glomps you*
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 19:23 CST
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UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 23:34 CST
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One word: UPDATE...soon! (hehe, that was two words) JUST DO IT!! *flails arms around*
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Title: My Character
Reviewed By: Cloaked in Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 17:15 CST
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Gotta say thatt was a good chapter.I dont fell like sharpening any weapons right now but this is my character. ~~~~~ NAME- Shadow AGE- 121 HAIR-thick midback brown hair with dark gray highlights HEIGHT-4'11 BIRTHDAY-Dec 10th AFRAID OF(you don't have to include this if you don't want to)-her friends dying in front of her eyes while she cannot do a thing to help them. PERSONALITY-Anti-social and very distant DEMON (yes or no) if no what are they-yes wolf demon WEAPONS-katana,sythe,daggers SPECIALTIES-Can blend in with the shadows so she is undetected. SEX (male or female)-female CLOTHES-Always wears black.Shoes, cargo pants and armbamds.Around her neck is a black chocker knecklace with a silver cross.The last thing is her bandana. CLAWS (yes or no)-yes WINGS (yes or no) if yes what kind-no TAIL (yes or no) if yes what kind-yes...a wolf tail EARS (of course yes, but what type are they)- yes they are wolf ears NAILS (nail polish, long, short)-not to short but long enough to slash a throat. TEETH (are they sharp or regular)-sharp OTHERS (anything that you'd like to add about there life or something else)-Was born a raised in a demon tribe in Makai.The village was attacked one day and she was forced to watch her friends and family be murdered and slaughtered in front of her eyes.Ever since then she has been distant so she does not have to feel that pain again.
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Reviewed By: Life of Freedom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name- Darkfire Age- 15 Hair- black, sticking out bangs and silver-gray hair that sticks out to the left Height- little less than 5' Birthday- 8/11/90 Afraid of(you don't have to include this if you don't want to)- slaying my friends on a mad slaughter Personality- kind, but cruel if consumed by the wolf within Demon (yes or no) if no what are they- fox, fire, wolf, and darkness Weapons- a katana, a wakazachi, and a tanto Specialties- can form anything from fire or darkness, or both Sex (male or female)- female Clothes- jeans and a t-shirt, sometimes a sweatshirt or hooddie Claws (yes or no)- yes Wings (yes or no) if yes what kind- no Tail (yes or no) if yes what kind- yes, a black wolf tail Ears (of course yes, but what type are they)- human Nails (nail polish, long, short)- long, claw-like (InuYasha nails) Teeth (are they sharp or regular)- only sharp canines Others (anything that you'd like to add about there life or something else)- extremely protective --hope this is what you were looking for. if not, sorry i wasted your time.--
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Title: OC
Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 19:40 CST
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Name:Inoriko, a.k.a. Nori Age: 15 Hair: Light purple with navy blue bangs, kept in a long braid down to waist Height: 5'2 D.O.B: 10/31 Afraid of: Opening herself up to people and her powers getting out of control Personality: Quiet, timid, serious, insecure about herself, usually apathetic and kind of a loner Demon: half human and half unknown demon Specialties: Read other people's thoughts and can force people to do things Gender: Female Clothes: Pink buttoned up shirt, black brimmed glasses, black denim jeans, studded belt, black pumas and silver bracelets on both wrists Claws: no Wings: no Tail: no Ears: normal ears Nails: about a centimeter long, painted black with silver tips Teeth: her canine teeth are like short fangs Other: Made her human mother kill her demonic father then made her commit suicide afterwards when she was VERY little, she remembers it a lot in nightmares. Doesn't like to talk about it and she often uses her powers without meaning to. Tries not to harm those she loves, but she never forgives herself if she hurts a friend. Never really opens up, but sometimes cries a random moments. After her parents death, she was raised by an abusive foster family, but she ran away from them and now lives on her own.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally think that was one of your best chapters yet, keep up the good work! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Animefreak11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 18:40 CST
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i may do an OC...but not right now cuz i have to go... remind me though or i'll forget thanx to my dory memory!!! ^_~ :P UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animefreak11 *too lazy* On: December 06, 2004 20:55 CST
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hehehe really?? aww! *blush*tacklehug* !!! ^_^ thats what some other people think... i do like writing, just not writing for english class... and my mum tells me... i should invest 200% in what i really like... -_- talk about some help... :P lol anyway... gr8 chapter!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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Title: new chapter
Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter so fast! Wow! But you shouldn't fell pressured by your readers to update, because if you rush things then it doesn't turn out as good. Anyway, well done. ^^ ~Ja ne
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your story and it is very good, the plot is excellent as well and I love how crazy some of the characters are! Although some grammer and spelling need to be fixed in certain places but other then that, I look forward for the next chapter! Update as soon as you can before I lose my sanity over it! ~Ja ne
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Reviewed By: animefreak11 *not logged in* On: December 05, 2004 21:32 CST
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err..... i don't know!!! :P oh yeah!!! maybe... someone can help me decide what to do as a career for my future??? does that sound good??? ^___^ anyway....yeah fun chapter!!!! UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 20:35 CST
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Wow! That was so good. You should definitly update. But here our a couple of things I think you should improve on. First of all you should really pay attention to your grammer and spelling because when you're reading the story it gets really annoying when there are so many mispelled words. I mean you're a really good writer and if you improved your writing and grammer it would be like... the Ultimate fan fic! Whooooooooo! *Ahem* Anyway, the second thing you should improve on is that you said it was a Hiei and Vera fan fic, but Hiei has hardly even been in it. And last of all, I think that the stroy is going way to slow. I really like your style of writing but I almost didn't finish it because it was a little boring. But over all I'd say if you would improve on that stuff ( only if you want) your fan fic would be the ULTIMATE FAN FIC!!!!!! Wow I can't beleive I wrote so much! I only have 550 characters left. WHOO! Okay I'm done.
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Reviewed By: animefreak11 *too lazy* On: December 04, 2004 19:37 CST
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me got my wish!!!!! ^^ i think.... *pensive* err... anyway...vera is sinking?? yusuke you jerk!!!!!! *slap* go save her!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P jk.... anyway... update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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