| "Telling Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls pls pls contiue this fic or at least think about it it is really gd an would b a shame for it 2 stay unfinished
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Reviewed By: Freddy17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story. Another good sakura/naruto fic. I wonder if you will continue. It's been 2 years.. but a person can still hope eh? Well just in case no one has said it already.. plz update :)
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Reviewed By: InuyashaMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was very thoughtful I think you should continue writing this, I mean it should be finished. If you want, you only need one chapter to finish it up. It's not that hard. One little chapter. 3-6 pages... Simple, no? Just try and do it. I think this thing could come full-circle. Think about it. A'ight? --InuyashaMaster
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: cloudseph [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool want it to be finished
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Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good, real good. there were a few times where you got just a little bit to detailed for my tastes, but your competence with the written language managed to overcome this fact and provide for an overall enjoyable read. i await to see more from you on this story. - Chaos Damn It
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Reviewed By: Smiter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 04:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update. ^_^ Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Impressive
Reviewed By: DokuRyu (fo rizzle) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm..only thing I really didn't like about your fic, was well, Naruto died, which truly wouldn't happen. Kyubi's chakra would heal Naruto. The only possibility of Naruto dying is if Kyubi was sealed like when Orochimaru did. I love Saku/Naru pairing, and I think she is a bit blind, well totally blind of his deeper affection for her. I found a good Saku/Naru fic on Adult Fanfic.net but I don't know the name. It was a one-shot, and also was a Sasuke slasher! Definately one of my favourites! I liked your fic, but killing Naruto was well, not so good....
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