| "Sesshoumaru, sit!" Reviews/Comments [ 158 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshysbaby On: February 14, 2005 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it alot! It took me awhile to catch up on the chapters since I only started reading them a little while ago...but now that I'm caught up I find myself checking almost every hour to see if you've put the next one up! I love the fact that you keep Sesshoumaru as he is and how you don't changoe his personality as most writers do.....well done! And one last thing: happy Valentine's day!
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Reviewed By: youkie On: February 10, 2005 15:05 CST
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This one was pretty good but I think that the nose power thing is strang but the lover for destiny is os romantic.UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON pleas^-^
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Title: a lovely review for you
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel On: February 09, 2005 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoo! this story cracks me up, and i normally dont like stories that contain original characters, but something about Amaya draws me. plus i love Sesshoumaru. i mean who doesnt love the cold expressionless perfection that is him. lol. keep up the good work and i love the dynamics you have going between the characters. keep up the good work and update soon.
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Title: Wh...?!
Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 18:09 CST
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BAF?! I cant believe it!!! Its me... Serinay Kawasaki from ff.net. I didnt know that you were apart of mm.org as well!!! Are you stalking me? lol Just kidding!!! Well welcome and hope to hear from you soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: February 05, 2005 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had BETTER be prepared to finish what you started!!!!!!!!!!!!! There is no way we will let you off the hook without updating soon!(Imagine a group of pitchfork-holding you-fans heading to your house) I HATE CLIFFIES!!!!! And besides, I wanna know if she kills Sesshy or if she just bugs him to near-death! ^^ I'm sooo looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Youkie On: February 05, 2005 14:29 CST
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Hay, I love your story and you have to hurry up and get the next chapter out fast befor I die.(looks up with puppy dog eyes)
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Reviewed By: Youkie On: February 05, 2005 14:28 CST
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Hay, I love your story and you have to hurry up and get the next chapter out fast befor I die.(looks up with puppy dog eyes)
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Reviewed By: Chrissy14 On: February 01, 2005 21:05 CST
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YAY!! NEW CHAPPY AGAIN!! lol I've been checking back again and again, hoping, no...praying for a new chap!! *sniffle* Anyway! Super! I just lo-o-o-ove how he can't get Amaya outta his head! I am really really really looking forward to yer next chappy! *and please explain: what is Amaya? I'm confuzzed* =)
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Reviewed By: evilsmiley On: February 01, 2005 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really good and you really made it so sesshoumaru's personal side comes out a lot more than usual with out changing wat we already know about him..damn...good....you better finish soon or i'll be very angry...hehee....but really this is a great story and i can't wait to hear the end..but you better not just drop off like most of the other facfics i've read..bubye
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Reviewed By: Delu (not logged in) On: February 01, 2005 08:36 CST
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Ok, first the unpleasantries..."only reason she seized crying" according to this, Rin abroubtly grabbed crying (??). I think what you want instead of seized is 'ceased', which means ended. Aside from that, AHHH! It was so cute! "I don't always have nightmares about tests" I absolutely love it, you are always so original and fresh with your chapters. I don't think I've ever read anywhere the point of view of someone inside Miroku's windtunnel; I hadn't even really thought of it! We are going to find out what Amaya is soon, right? *soulful puppy dog eyes* Cause you're killing me here with curiousity! ^_^ Somehow I knew the fairy would have to be of some help somewhere along the road. So, will Miroku at any time be ragging on Inu about hugging Kagome in the middle of the night (even if it was in comfort) in payback for getting thrown in the river? Oh, is Sessy in hot water when Amaya gets away from Naraku. I can't wait! I think Sesshomaru was written especially well in this chapter, with the thoughts in his head and the breaking of the mirror. He doesn't seem worked up, but all of us true fans know his is (in comparison to other fanfics in which Sessy is suddenly more expressive than a drunk gay man). Oh, so well written and what a wonderful chappy! As always, am excited for more ^_^ It is so wonderful all the new reviews you are getting! I'm glad you're getting the attention you deserve, and I'm proud to have been one of the first of your fans ^_~.
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 17:51 CST
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Hehe, looks like the dog demon can't get the hell cat out of his mind. I find that one fact quite entertaining. Keep up the good work, it's great!
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Reviewed By: llama On: January 31, 2005 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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MAN! this wuz the best fic i've ever read! you've got to keep writing! I'm typing this on 1/31/05 and it is 2:30am in the morning ON A SCHOOL NIGHT!! so you had better update soon! Well i'm sugar high right now so don't mind me! g2g! Night!
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Title: Great Chappie!
Reviewed By: Melfire63-logged out On: January 25, 2005 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chappie! Glad you finally Updated. Wow, you're too kind to thank me in yur fic, cough, I wouldn't, your nicer than me! Well keep in touch, and blah blah blah, keep typing!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who is she?! IS she the first preistess who the jewel came from?
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Reviewed By: Kai Maiko (Not Signed In) On: January 25, 2005 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Terrific! The Greatest Sesshoumaru Story EVER!!! Wow! I can't stop raving about this story! I loved it! It is the BEST Sesshoumaru story EVER! And i've read a LOT of them. PLEASE!!!! You MUST write more of this story! Never stop! NEVER!!! (Fades with manical laughter) *cough* Sorry. Hehehe. I LOVE IT! MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!.......(fade)
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